Inspirational Contest [κяıѕτєи ღ]

  • The Poetic Child
    18 years ago

    Ive read all the Rules

    Im fine
    by ♪↑Musicians Finest♪↑

    Broken and torn apart
    feelings of something restless
    keeping me up at night
    leaving me breathless

    ripped out my wings
    that you flew beneath
    every aching part grew
    as i grinned my teeth

    her heart pounded me
    gave me a certain abuse
    abducting my mind
    to feel theres no use

    such purity and Divine
    something i found
    in the heart of a liar
    depression was bound

    but now I'm back on my feet
    my soul is brushed clean new
    search through the mind
    find no thoughts of you

    I'm lifted back on my legs
    every part of my body is dry
    the tears have all disappeared
    no longer a reason to cry

    Inspiration in this dedication
    I'm finally come to realize
    not to believe everything
    every pack has some lies

    lessons slammed in my head
    memorizing every quote and line
    that i can live and go on
    without you.....still I'm fine..

    * Dedication- Dedicated to those you have been broken and hurt, let it be, you can still get back on your feet, Love doesnt care about time, but dont let time get in your way, we have the strength to get back up and move on.Only if you choose.

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    18 years ago

    Read the rules:)

    Enjoy Your Stay

    Take that knife away from your wrist,
    There is no need to carve your pain onto your skin!
    I know you feel life has taken the good away from you,
    But that is no reason to want to end your life!

    Little girl lying in the hospital bed,
    What were you thinking to do that to yourself?
    I don't understand how someone can want to end there life
    Over a meaningless guy.

    This story is so often told
    And I don't know why
    People all around me are crying more and more
    And people all around me continously want to die!

    Hold on when you feel you have little to give,
    There's nothing more painful then a good life unlived!
    Sitting there in control of your fate,
    Drop that lethal and fatal weapon before it's to late!

    Look around you when reason to live is few
    Deep inside buried in your soul,
    Is a miracle thats waiting to unfold
    Don't steal that away from the world....

    Miracles are in short supply
    And each and everyone of us has the power
    To change the world in more then one way!
    So hold on, change the world and enjoy your stay:)

  • J Lau
    18 years ago

    Read the rules...

    A Simple Photo...
    by J. Lau

    A simple photo
    Glanced at by many
    Seen through the lens
    Of an individual

    A single glimpse
    Of a snow covered tree
    Standing alone
    In the freezing scene

    Many claimed it's portrait
    But never quite the same
    Each with their own perspective
    Captured through their own interpretation

    Some expressed a sad lonely scene
    Where time froze all living creatures
    Chilling winds drifted off the photo
    A land of lifeless emptiness

    The contrasting view stood out like a rose
    Displaying the beauty of a winter wonderland
    Where the freshly covered tree
    Glisten and shine it's glorious coat

    Yet another photo presents a welcomed invitation
    To all creatures young and old
    A new paradise to be found
    Of fresh white powder on the ground

    But this one unique shot
    Of a baby left to cry
    Under this same lonely tree
    Melted all the snow away

    One single glimpse
    One single photo
    One single perspective
    Saved one precious life

    Life is like photography
    Is a matter of perspective
    There is no right or wrong point of view
    But there's always another angle that you may have missed

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  • EoB
    18 years ago

    Read the rules...twice=)

    How the Moon betrayed us

    We still recall them, those who spoke
    of where the winds of fate would find us.
    Their words were fair, our hearts awoke,
    the ache of which ere long would blind us.

    They said that, where the shadows are
    a light would rise at last, to save us,
    and sweep us to a place, afar
    where all the light and dark would crave us.

    We waited for the darkest night
    and left our homes where no one knew us
    and sought to find the brightest light,
    away from eyes that saw right through us.

    They said the moon would save us all
    but nay! Her every glimpse escaped us.
    The hunt of her enslaved us all.
    The bitter robes of failure draped us.

    We let our hopes too soon ascend
    trusting that the moon would show us,
    but she betrayed us in the end
    and all we saw were stars above us

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    What!!

    I was just gonna submit one!

  • The Poetic Child
    18 years ago

    lol haha

  • The Poetic Child
    18 years ago

    dun dun dunnnn

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    18 years ago

    When are the results being posted:)

  • J Lau
    18 years ago

    Wow... thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. Congrads and good work to all who entered.

    J. Lau

  • The Poetic Child
    18 years ago

    Congrats Everyone