SAMANTHA HOLLYWOOD`S NEW POEM!!

hey everyone! I know it`s been a while since I`ve written a new poem ;; I`ve been busy! But I`d really like some critique on this. I just wrote it last night, and I`m still willing to change it if necessary. Thanks much! All favors will be returned double. =D
The title of the poem, by the way, is ::
But We Knew You Never Cared

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

read it for free :P

Aww, thanks Darien. =D
Anyone else interested?

Anyone? Pleaseeeeee?

Comments, please? I got about 7 overnight, and hoping to get more. Thanks!

I just posted this yesterday, and its already top rated on the 'explicit' section. Please, check it out. I`ll return. =D

Hey everyone --
I gotta go babysit but I`ll be back!! Any comments received will be returned, double, or maybe triple. One liners will probably just be returned with one comment. Thanks much!!

I love you all!

Samantha Hollywood

I'll comment just because. No need to read anything.

I did itttttt! I think i was a bit harsh though:P

Could you please do Summer Heat

Thanks

--Steph

Thanks Steph && Kaylee!

I'll read a different one if you could read my new one, "Tarnished Mute"

Done. =D
Thanks, Kaylee.

Anyone Else?