how can i improve?

reading poetry outloud vs. reading it silently is much better!! when u read it outloud, you get to see the tone of the poem... b/c it might be different in ur head than when ur read it outloud.. make sense?

luv ya!! inna

i agree with leaving it if you like it. you will always have it as a little reminder of what you did before and it will help you to work out what to change from poem to poem.

Well it depends..but i prefer reading it slowly to feel words and to easily get the meaning