~*~BRYAN'S CONTEST~*~

sad love meaning like you got broke up w/ or that things just aren't going well or what...?

COULD IT BE LIKE you lost the one you love? like they died...lol. im still confused as well but im lookin through all my cds lol

~*W.C?*~

If it you could expand the contest to like, sad love as in You're Not The One by Daniel Bedingfield, I'd enter.. Because that's the only one I can think of.

Sorry.

xDarkSuicidex

But if it makes you feel better, I understand what this contest is about...

i got a ? is that guy related to natasha bedingfield because that last name is REALLY not common 2 have 2 of...ANYWAY ok i think i understand sorta now.
so like Unfaithful by Rihanna...it's a song...about love...and she's breaking some1s heart...well i already wrote a poem off of that song..like a guy breaking my heart w/ some other girl...is that ok??

OK! if this isnt rite lemme kno n ill change it in a flash!:D

Unfaithful-Rihanna

Baby, I know exactly what you doing,
when your "with the guys", who are you fooling?
Don't think I don't know about her, because I do,
Yet even though I know, I can't let go of you.

I saw you two kissing, late at night in the park,
I saw you two there, even if it was very dark.
That nearly broke my heart, I was just walking my dog,
You were a prince to me, but now just a lowly frog.

How could you be unfaithful to me, after all I've done,
You said you were going to marry me, and I would have your son.
What happened to that? Now you go breaking my heart?
Well, baby that's messed up, this is where we part.

You can have her, she won't be as good as me,
For I loved you so much, but this is the end baby.
You broke my heart, hope she breaks yours,
Hope she is a criminal and steals the stuff from your drawers.

Have a nice life, that you could've had with me forever,
But now it's too late, you and me don't belong together.
So, see you never, I love you none,
I hope you and your girlfriend have fun.

^^that is a good song. lol sry

wow some competition i got so far lol...COME ON PPL!

I wish I was good at love poems {broken hearted ones} ..but I'm not. =/

THIS JOB

Oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh...
I remember stormy weather
You said it was just February temper
This life is so hard
When you're down on you're luck
The FEDS took over
Possession of our truck

This job
Has taken my heart from me
I've shot
This gun
Too many times before
This job
Has taken it all from me
I won't
Be the one to
Pull this trigger anymore

I don't want to
Be the one who
Betrays everyone to
Just to get out of this life for myself
But I need to
To be with you
Stop living to please everybody else

Don't pretend
To be a victim
& say I'm just playing games
I know if you
Had only thought of it first
You'd have done the same

& I need to
Live through this
To be with you
& that keeps me
Going through a
Last job like today's
It took everything
That I didn't have
So I hope you
Appreciate the change

I missed you once
But I have
Been practicing my aim

This job
Has taken my will from me
I've let
Them tell me
What to do
Too many times before
This job
Has taken my self from me
I won't
Be the one to
Give in anymore

This job
Is all I've got going for me
But I
Don't want
To rely on this like before
This job
Is all that has defined me
But I
Can't hide
Behind this label anymore

This job
Is all life has offered me
But now
I've found
Someone worth living for
This job
Means absolutely nothing to me
I've found
A love
Worth so much fucking more

This job
Has taken my heart from me
I've shot
This gun
Too many times before
This job
Has taken it all from me
I won't
Be the one to
Pull this trigger anymore

Does this count? Based on "This Love" by Maroon 5, popular sad love, break-up song. My version is a story, and goes more into a drug-dealer leaving the business because his 'love' is gone, and may have someone on the outside also to encourage him, but it's unrequited. also, I can edit it if you don't want cursing.

Actually. I change my mind. I might give it a go. {BTW, I changed my name, AGAIN. It's supergirl.}

Let Go. {Ne-Yo}

Suffocated thoughts releasing pain,
Tightening feelings that won't dismay.
Padlocked doorways that lead to you,
Securing my entry to guard your way.
..............................How do I let go?

Bitter tastes healing two broken hearts,
Swallowing harsh words in self defense.
Stealing past memories only to regain,
Precious moments that were too intense.
..............................But should I let go?

Producing unwanted tears to run dry,
Staining all beauty outside aswel as in.
Revealing nothing but forced laughter,
Pretending this hurt doesn't feel within.
...............................I just can't let go!

July 31st 2006
Copyright © Natalie.

{P.S. Sorry if it's bad. I said I wasn't good at these types of poems. Lol..}

yay more people! MORE MORE I SAY!!! HEHEHHE haha sry i dont know whats up with that

Woo! Yay!

Cmonnnnnnnnn.

I hate having to wait for contests to end once I've entered them.

Just submit something, anyone, for me. =)
Puh-leease?

Where?..

Oh.. I see 'em now.

yay! thank you!

You were young,
Death is near,
you were with us all a week ago,
seeing you smile,
hearing you laugh,
seeing your face,
made all of our days turn to Sunshine,
now that you're gone,
i don't think things will ever be the same,
i don't think this pain will ever go away,
all of us sit here in shock still,
as hours pass by,
we cry and weep,
but nothing will change,
nothing will bring you back,
you're gone for good,
And some of just sit here,
and think why,
did this happen to you??,
you were so young,
And while others,
are sad because the didn't even say good bye,
and all we have left are memories,
some bad or good,
but we will hold them in our hearts forever,
and some of us sit,
and wish we had gotten to know him a lot better,
we cant bring you back,
theirs nothing we can do,
but pray and hope that you are listening to the,
words that we say to you,
and hope that you're watching over us this very moment,
we miss you,
we love you,
we all wish that this didn't happen,
but god wanted another angel,
and it was you,
and now when ever i remember you..
i smile, and laugh,
and cry,

^^^Is that meant to be for the contest?

Cause you're posting the same poem in every thread I go to.

Nikki's is for something sad and she loved the person so it = sad love? Which is qualified.

Argh someone reserved this love lol :\ i sing great at that song... hmm...

___________
Forgive me for a broken heart

I know I've been stupid
You say I've been unfaithful
Just blame it all on cupid
He's the one that made me love you

And even though my heart is
Beating for an answer
I know it took too long, far too long
To go the whole damn distance

So tell me, won't you forgive me
For giving you a broken heart?
The person that I loved so, that I gave it all
I tore half apart

I'm sorry for the things I've done
I'm sorry that I hurt you
I've come back just to say
I'm sorry and I love you

So won't you let me fix your heart and make it just like new?
I'll love you much more stronger than the toughest kind of glue
So if you want to take me back I swear I will be true
Just give me one last little chance and I'll give my love to you

Woo, Cmon guyyyyyyyyyys

Sorry this took so long -- It was hard for me to write for some reason.

This is what came forth from the song 'If You're Not The One' By Daniel Bedingfield.

Harder To Breathe

You're pulling me out to sea,
Making it harder to breathe,
And I miss you so,
But times moving too slow.
I need you here now,
To pull me out of this crowd.
Just wipe away my tears,
Take my burdens- my fears.
One day we'll live forever,
Our love with endeavor...
You're pulling me out to sea,
You're making it harder to breathe,
But in our lost ocean,
There's so much motion,
Save me now,
Pull me from this crowd,
I'm slipping away-
But not today.

xDarkSuicidex

--I tried for you, at least. This definately isn't my best.. Sorry.

my name for my poem is it: just doesnt seem real

And then i turned seven
In loving memory

Yay!!! =D

=O! Wow!

My mouth is literally dropped.

Lmao!

Thanks, Bryan. =D

I'm glad I actually checked this contest tonight, or I wouldn't have seen that I won until next week..

But um, My latest would be great. =) Tehe

And, congrats to the other winners. =P woohoo!

Aw, thank you... I did my best not really thinking I'd make it, but just putting a poem up for you.. Thanks Bryan!

xDarkSuicidex

Please Do:
The Sun's Failing Doom
A Knight's Tale
I Am
The Dreamer

Thanks!

yay um my newest ones would b great:) thanks!!!

woot i got 2nd! (changed my name)

erm im sorry i kinda didnt read ur post till right now lol XD very sorry.

Thanks 4 judging :)

I write my own songs lol :p can i say that?

ok then... umm...

Forgive me [for your broken heart] by Evanescence

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