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  • Lost & Delirious
    19 years ago

    Hi everyone

    I have some new poems that I would like you to r/r/c (read/rate/comment). Your thoughts, advice, interpretations, and honest opinion would be appreciated.

    And/Or

    If you like my comments, give me titles and I'll r/r/c up to three poems per person.

    Thanks!!

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    Any of my featured please. I've been told today that my poem Metal of Hunger was just a jumble of word with n meaning on another website where they told me to only post poems on a certain setion for starter writers. :(

  • Lost & Delirious
    19 years ago

    Kaylee, that really sucks. What poetry site was it anyway?

    I r/r/c "In Mommy's Arms", I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. I'll read some more of yours tomorrow.

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    everypoet.com

  • Lost & Delirious
    19 years ago

    If they said that about your poem, they would hate mine. I like honest comments but not harsh, rude ones. They suck!

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • UnToLd TrUtH
    19 years ago

    Gaby

    I would like you to read my new poem You were there for me. I will also r/r/c some of your in return! :) Thanks a ton!

  • UnToLd TrUtH
    19 years ago

    Gaby
    Thanks for the comment on my new poem I added some stuff to the 2nd paragraph. Here is what I added.....

    I thought why did she leave me! Was it because she didn't like me? But back then I didn't understand that it was her parents chose only that she had to leave me and it hurt.

    I want to know if I should keep it in for the show of emotion or leave it the way it is.

  • Lost & Delirious
    19 years ago

    UntoldTruth, I think you should keep it. When I write a poem, I write until I don't know what else to add or change, that means that I've said all I wanted in that poem.

    BTW, thanks for your comment on "Baby Girl, Let's Fall Asleep Forever".

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • Arcane Blondie
    19 years ago

    I checked out two of your poems! I love them, so I added you to my favorites =D

    Please look at my two latest poems; It will be greatly appreciated!

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    if you have time would you please do my three latest? thankss.

  • Lost & Delirious
    19 years ago

    Arcane Blondie, thanks for commenting on my poems, and adding me to your favorites. I r/r/c your two latest poems:

    *Escape Into Nature
    *Listen

    I really enjoyed reading them, especially the nature one. If you want me to comment on another let me know.

    Thanks for sharing.

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • LockedInEternity
    19 years ago

    Hey can you do
    "Silent Murder"
    "You are my happiness" &&
    "Our LIfe"
    and Just put which ones you want me to do in your comment cause i may not find this thread again:):)
    Thanks=D

  • Tormented
    19 years ago

    ill go and check them out!!

  • Tormented
    19 years ago

    i commented on two of your poems u can comment on any of my poems!!:)

  • Lost & Delirious
    19 years ago

    Jessy, I r/r/c your three latest poems:

    *Delicate Rose
    *My Love, My Life, My Man, My Other Half..
    *Upon This Grave

    My favorite one was the second one, it was lovely. Thanks for sharing.

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • Lost & Delirious
    19 years ago

    MaLuV4uIsEnDlEsS

    I r/r/c:

    *Silent Murder
    *You are my happiness
    *Our Life

    Thanks for sharing, my favorite one was the third one.

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • Lost & Delirious
    19 years ago

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    I r/r/c:

    *Remembering
    *Is This My First Love?

    Thanks for commenting on mine.

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • Lost & Delirious
    19 years ago

    Brianna:

    I r/r/c

    *Just Tell Me That You Want This
    *Pretty Words Can Cut Just Like A Knife

    Thanks for sharing.

    XoXo
    Gaby