Please read my poem, "Fade Away"

I only got one vote on "Fade Away", and I would really like to know what some more people think about it! Please read it. I promise to read and rate some of your poems as well. Also, please read my newest poems, "How You Made Me Cry, and "Lullaby". Thank You!!!

Sydney

I did fade away

Could you please do The past is tearing us apart

I did all 3.
Very beautifully written.