For people who take poetry seriously

Please rrc my poem 'Upon a lovers ideal'. I am looking for some honest critique. If you leave a comment saying 'great 5/5' I will not bother returning the favour. However if you tell me what you liked or didn't like about it, I will do the same for you. Post here which one you would like me to do.
Thank you

Thanks Brianna. Done yours :)

I r/r/c "Upon a lovers ideal", could you please comment on "Self-Esteem Decayed"?

Thanks

XoXo
Gaby

Done, but don't worry about commenting any of my stuff, unless you REALLY want to, haha.

Done

Could you do :Goodbye

thanks

--Steph

there you go! could you please do my latest? thankss.