MY NEW POEM IS OUT

  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    the title is
    I am Jealous

    please let me know what you think and I will return the favor as always......

    DONT FORGET 5/5 CAUSE I WILL NOT

  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    done, anyone else??????

  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    come on ppl. i really need some comment and votes,lol.

  • Tormented
    19 years ago

    i cant cuz i have already commented it :-(

  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    I know u did, thank alot, but i dont know where is rest of them?lol

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    there you go, could you do my latest please? thankss.

  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    both done, thanks
    and Jessy i will really appriciate it if u could tell me my mistakes so i could edit it,
    thank you again

  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    anyone else

  • Samantha Hollywood
    19 years ago

    Sure, I`ll do it. =D No need to comment on any of mine if you don`t want to.

  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    haha
    thnaks alot and i will for sure check ur poems,lol.
    thanks again

  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    samantha i have done urs already, i owe u one,lol

  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    anyone else

  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    anyyyyyyyyyyyoneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    anyone

  • Just Lucy
    19 years ago

    excellent, i voted and commented, i loved it!!! if you could just do my latest that would be great

  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    sure, thank both of you

  • Just Lucy
    19 years ago

    your welcome lol it was a pleasure reading it =)

  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    i liked ur poem as well,
    and u really helped me by ur vote, lol.
    my rating got up.
    thank u alot....

  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    anyone else please,

  • Just Lucy
    19 years ago

    lol your vote boosted my rating up aswel lol thanks =)

  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    lol. that is great,
    Can u check out my other poems as well, i will also check out urs,lol
    thanks alot

  • Just Lucy
    19 years ago

    of course i can ^^

  • Brittney Follett
    19 years ago

    I did yours :) awesome poem btw.... Can you do my newest Trapped In Time,
    thanks babe

  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    lol, sure i will do it, and thank u
    and special thank to LUCY
    ur the best.

  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    anyone else

  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    anyyyyyyyyyyoneeeeeeeeeeeeee

  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    thanksssssssssssssssss

  • Just Lucy
    19 years ago

    haha thanks Goran

  • shela
    19 years ago

    done. it s waz grt

  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    anyone else

  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    anyone

  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    anyone????????????????????