New poems!!!

  • Rachel
    19 years ago

    Hi I just posted three new poems and would like them to be rated and commented on and I will return the favour. Just tell me what ones you want done! The new ones are: Home sweet home
    First Look
    Nanny im crying
    Thanks!!!!!!!!!!

  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    ok i will check them out now, please do my new ones, thanks

  • The Lonely Rose
    19 years ago

    i already commented on them!!!! they r really good!! keep on writin!!

  • The Lonely Rose
    19 years ago

    thxs for puttin me in favs!! really apriciate it!!

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    I've done one so far.. If you could please do "Toxic Narcotic" that would be great. =)

    I'll most likely do the other two soonish.

  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    thank you for adding me in ur favorite list,

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Awe!! ^_^ Thanks for adding me to your favs! Tehe!

  • Rachel
    19 years ago

    Ok I have done them. I'm so impressed by you three! I've added you all to my favourites because you are all original in your own ways and have different things to express. I look forward to seeing more of your work!!
    Keep it up!

  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    thank u for ur nice comment, i will check out more of ur works later, they r really nice. great job

  • Rachel
    19 years ago

    Thanks Goran for your comment on 'nanny i'm crying' I'm glad you said about how I put my feelings into words because I was crying the entire time I wrote it!
    Thanks again means alot!
    xxx

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    there you go, i did 2.. could you have a look at my 2 latest please? thankss.

  • Rachel
    19 years ago

    I have commented on some of them before so I read some others and commented on them instead. Well done keep it up!

  • Rachel
    19 years ago

    Anyone else???

  • A Broken Bleeding Soul
    19 years ago

    Hey I'll check them out. Can you please read "When I'm Gone" and any other poems of your choice. Thanks.

    ~ Tina

  • Rachel
    19 years ago

    Hey I'm looking at them now and you are really talented! Your poems send shivers down my spine!!! Keep writing and keep expressing yourself!!

  • Rachel
    19 years ago

    done it! very cheeky lol

  • Rachel
    19 years ago

    Anybody else?????????????????????

  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    just wondering if u could do my I AM JEOLIOUS, i know you have done my other ones but i really need some vote in this one,lol
    thanks u

  • Rachel
    19 years ago

    Just read, commented and rated it. Another great poem! 5/5
    xxx

  • blueknight
    19 years ago

    ok rachel done on one of yours

    just check my A beggar Cries

    kk thanks

  • Rachel
    19 years ago

    done it. Well done it had really good description!

  • blueknight
    19 years ago

    thanks