Finally a new one

I have a new poem, it's called...You...I havent wrote in awhile so please be honest be harsh if you have too, but just be honest so i can fix my writing b/c its turning to crapppp...i'll return all favours, thanks!

Done. Ignore the votes cos they are the only crap part. Needs a little work but good effort.

there you go, could you do "Violated" for me please? thankss.

Hey, Thanks for yall's comments...I'm sorry it's taking so long for me to comment back on yours..but I will do them soon..I just have stuff I have to deal with around here first. but i WILL do them, I promise! =D

kk DONE!! See told you , i would do them! =D

Anyone else?

Commented. =D

r/r/c any of mine.

done..and thanks...i'll do another one later but i have to go now!! =D

Done. Thanks

anyone?