Filmmakers

I make films somewhat, I use Adobe Premire pro 1.5

I mostly do/make films with friends and such. I like camera angles like Alfred Hitchcock use to do.

I use after effects as well, I don't have Final Cut, for I don't have a MAC, but Mac's are definitely the way to go with video/image editing due to the graphics.

I am actually in the process of writting a script, maybe I can email it to you, and you can give me some advice on how to re-word it or do some of the shots better?

Here it is, kind of short, not sure if I should make it longer or what, all input and advice would be great.

Thanks again, Joe

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The Escape Artist

Intro: The story starts by fading into a most wanted sign. The person on the sign is Giuseppe Bianco (Joe). The image of Giuseppe on the most wanted sign slowly fades into video of Giuseppe.

Scene 1: The camera is strait on Giuseppe and moves backwards revealing lighting from both sides of the room with smoke. Giuseppe is sitting on a couch dressed in a suit and tie. The camera pans from the front view to the side view, slowly zooming in on Giuseppe’s face. He means business. Giuseppe has a flashback of how he became wanted.

Flashback: Fades with blurred edges from scene 1 to the flashback. Giuseppe is walking down the street. Camera is behind Giuseppe flowing him. When he just about reaches his destination (a house which he has been staking out for a long time), he stops walking. The camera does a 360 degree rotation counter clockwise slowly zooming in around Giuseppe, zooming till it is Giuseppe’s view. He’s looking at the house.

(Goes into another flashback and scans quickly though video of him sitting in a car with binoculars looking at the house, him taking notes of how and when John Smith (Bill) is home and gone and most of all looking for ways to enter and exit quickly - returns to the original flashback)

Giuseppe continues to walk towards the house. The camera cuts to video of the house. Camera man (Bill) walks with the camera towards the house, this represents the view that Giuseppe sees. The house he is about to encounter is an F.I.A. agent’s house. The camera cuts from Giuseppe walking to the house to Smith the F.I.A. agent, walking out of his house. The camera pans from the front of John to the back of him walking to his car. He opens the door to his car. The camera cuts to a view looking up at the car door, the camera is down by the petals of the car. As John starts to enter the car; the camera pans from the lower view to a higher view, camera moves from the petals to the passenger seat. You see John start the car and you see his hands on the wheel. The camera pans from the side of John to the front of John. The camera is on the dash board of the car, you see John with his head turned backing out of the driveway.

The camera then cuts to the back of John. The camera is in the back seat of the car. You see him start to drive down the road. The camera cuts to Giuseppe’s view. Giuseppe is looking directly at the car. The camera is on the car as it passes Giuseppe; acting as though Giuseppe turns his head. Giuseppe looks back at the house and starts to walk. As he approaches the house he looks around real quick to see if anyone is watching. Giuseppe gets the other key that John keeps under his door mat and opens the house. He then places the key back where it was. The camera’s view is looking at the door, the camera cuts to the inside of the house looking at the door. As the door opens Giuseppe walks in and the camera pans around him as he walks by.

Giuseppe walks through the house to find John’s Computer. He finds the computer and he starts to look for information on the F.I.A. Main page. He finds his information and saves it on disk by downloading it. He then leaves the house. John comes home to find out that someone had downloaded Information from his computer. He knows who it was; he contacts the F.I.A. and sends men along with himself to Giuseppe’s house. John along with F.I.A. bust open Giuseppe’s door.

Scene 2: Giuseppe is there and tries to escape with a gun, but John shots him in the back. He then handcuffs him.

THE END

He hancuffed a shot guy? Being in the back/spine will immobolize/kill Giusepppe.

I think I learned a different way to write this type of thing

learning is the key to mastering everything in life....lol

Ooo. I don't make films. The closet thing I did to that effect, was be the director of some small plays and perform them at my Highschools theatre. I like to photograph things though? Even though thats a bit away from filming. WOOOOT. I don't know. I felt the need to comment this because it said 'film' in the name. =ll.

-ScreenplayOfDesire.

You guys are really talented, I'm jealous..
tehee..

God Bless!

why be "jealous" eveyone is good at something...