Children Abuse - 1 for 4

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    If you r.r.c my new poem called: Children Abuse {CinqTroisDecaLa Rhyme}

    I'll return the favor with 4 comments and rates.

    CATCH: You MUST post the name of your poems on here or I will NOT rate.comment them.
    You also can NOT leave one line comments...Give me some insight!

    xDarkSuicidex

  • -The-Undying-
    19 years ago

    All done (: I would love for you to comment on:
    I love the way the candle lights your face,
    Rescue me,
    And I love you plz 8-P
    peace xo

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    Done..

    Anyone else?

    xDarkSuicidex

  • Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child
    19 years ago

    just commented. could you please r/r/c :

    Last Favor: Let Them Say Goodbye
    He Says: The Break Up
    Voices In The Rain
    Pleading Heart

    THANK YOU AND YOUR POEM WAS AMAZING!!!!

  • Wings Of Flames
    19 years ago

    'ryan and jane'
    Beast Of White'
    'The Killer'
    'priceless'

    THANK YOU

  • -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-
    19 years ago

    Done!
    could you please comment on
    -perfect litle girls sucide
    -finding the princess with cuts along her wrists
    -the girl nobody knows
    &
    -do you remember me daddy?

    Thanks and love
    Mel

  • Lady Vengeance
    19 years ago

    -Your day of retribution
    -This is the end
    -Bride with a dead bouquet
    -Dead as our love for each other

    i'll do "child abuse" now : D

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    I did it!.. Just read my newest one..
    "At Her Funeral"

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    I'll get to everyone's tomorrow..

    Sorry for the delay...

    I have a lot of homework tonight and band, so I won't get home until late. Thank you for understanding.

    Until then, anyone else?

    xDarkSuicidex

  • J Lau
    19 years ago

    Left comment on your poem. Brilliant work!

    Please r/r/c "A Simple Photo", "If Only...", "You once said to me" and "True Feelings..."

    Thanks!

    J. Lau

  • LadyPearl
    19 years ago

    I did it, loved it!! I don't think I have any new poems for you to r/c. You're just have to wait, I might write one today.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    Noni-
    Out of question, why did you do three of mine? I thank you a thousand times over, but I was just curious. Thanks, though. =]

    And thanks to everyone...I'll be on tomorrow to return all these favors.

    xDarkSuicidex

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    There you go, could you please do "Misty Figures" && "Cosy Campfires [Cinquain]" for me? Thankss. xx

  • LadyPearl
    19 years ago

    Hey darksuicide, I think I did three of yours because you read one of my poems.

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Hey Dark.. I actually have 2 new ones for you to read.. whenever you are free.. I'm not in any rush

    "At Her Funeral" &
    "World War II - Adolf Hitler"

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    -Sighs-

    I'll get to these asap, everyone. Today I came home with five books of subjects to do...So hopefully I'll be able to get the comments in tonight. Thank you for being patient and understanding.

    xDarkSuicidex

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    Ash --

    Done with you. Thank you for waiting.

    xDarkSuicidex

    On To The Next!

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    Wings Of Flames --

    Done!

    GREAT JOB!

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    Broken --

    Done!!!

    Whoooo

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    Baby Hum --

    Done!

    I'm moving along!

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    Lady Vengeance --

    Done!

    WONDERFUL Job.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    Darien --

    Done!

    And I owe you two more..

    Good job.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    Debbie--

    You did NOT post titles, so I only commented on two and will only comment on two. You did not read the rules.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    J. Lau---

    Done..

    Almost done, everyone!

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    Noni--

    Get back to me as soon as you get new poems up; I owe you, don't forget. =]

    xDarkSuicidex

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    Jessy--

    Done!

    If I skipped anyone, let me know! Thanks tons guys!