New contest.

Only 7 more ! And i know everyone has sad poems !

I Never Stopped Loving You

Why did you leave me after all we had...
Why did you push me away...
Did you want me with you at all...
Why did leave me for another woman after i gave you everything..
Why did you get married to her when i told you how i felt....
Why did you forget about me...
I turned a teacher....
And i saw your kids everyday...
I was their favorite teacher....
I wish they were ours....
our kids...
Do you really love her??
Did you feel anything for me??
In my soul i am dead hoping to come back to life to see you once more.....
But now you notice me..
at Back to school night...
You started to talk to me more..
I loved it...
But your wife made you move...
I can't see your beautiful kids anymore...
nor you..
But why do you say that you truly loved me when I lay dying in your arms..
I couldn't handle it anymore....
You just not With me in my soul...
Why are you holding me saying that you care with all your heart..
But all i can say to you is that....
before i am gone from this world..
*whispers* i never stopped loving you

Oh wow, that was really good. =)
6 more ! =D

Ryan and Jane
by Wings Of Flames

++Before you read this poem I'd like you to know a few things: This is 5 minutes after I have found out my sister may die, she had a baby which may replace her from this world. thanks++
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Upon the sheets of white,
Lays the child she has conceived,
The precious jewel beside her,
The innocence we believed,

She cradles him in her arms,
Now inside the material womb,
But there's nothing she can do,
Now she's fighting through the doom,

I'm shaking in the distance,
I want to hold her near,
The icy fakeness in my eyes,
With the smile I hold to fear,

'The pain is here,' She trembles,
In the quaking of night's kiss,
I feel her forehead coldest cold,
In lust of all this bliss,

I seek the kindness of your hearts,
Please pray for her tonight,
For baby Ryan he is so scared,
For Jane to see no light,

She is a mother bearing a gift,
She's a sister for our five,
She's the daughter and the wife,
Can you help me keep her alive?

Oh wow, i got the shivers from that, very well done! =) And im sorry to hear about your sister.

5 more ! =)

i thuough that i would say i changed my poem i found a better one to put up i just made it too.

Alrighty, When the other ones come in i will be able to judge this. =D

so who wins?

It's fine, I will take it as I have been slacking on checking into this lol. It is now closed, I will judge the contest when I get home later on tonight. I have school until 12:30 and then I have to stop off at work and talk to my boss about shifts. Should have it done by at least 4:00. =] . Thanks for your patience guys! =]

-Jenna.xo

Okay, I have made some changes lol, i couldn't just simply get it down to five, this contest took me 4 hours longer than i had planned! Lol, these were all very good poems. I will post the winners in a minute. =]

-Jenna.

First Place...Ryan And Jane; by Wings Of Flames.
Second Place...Fell; by Spanish367
Third Place...I Hate You; by ConCealedInAddiction
Fourth Place...Intensity; by Natalie.
Fifth Place...Pulling Apart Love; by Broken Misery
HM...Poisoned Me; by Brianna

Congratulations to all winners, and if you have certain poems in mind that you would like me to do, please post the titles here, and I will get around to doing these soon. I will work my way from HM to First place, to get the less r/r/c out of the way lol.

-Jenna.

Woo! =D Congrats to the winners!!! All great poems. tehe!!

And Um.. My latest 5 would be alright I guess. Tehe. Shpank you! =D

aw i lose. oh well congrats every1:)

congratulations =]!

Awee.. I lose as well. =[

Okay Natalie, I have done yours, everyone else, I will just start off and comment on ones that call out to me because I don't know how often you check in on this forum, so yeah.

-Jenna.

Congrats winners... good job

--Sher

Okay, I am done Brianna, onto Broken Misery now. =]

-Jenna.

No problem Darling. Done Broken Misery.

-Jenna.

Natalie, I have already finished yours, so I will go onto doing ConCealedInAddiction now! =]

-Jenna.

Okay, finished ConCealedInAddiction now. I have to go and do the dishes, so I will work on Spanish367 when I am done. =]

-Jenna.

Done Spanish367, one poem short of how many I had to do, but I will do a new one to make up for it when one is added. =] Onto Wings Of Flames now. =]

-Jenna.

Okay, all done. Thank you to everyone who participated in this contest. It was much appreciated. Keep on writing all of you, you all have such a true talent. And congratulations again to the winners. =]

-Jenna.

No problem Deary. It was an amazing poem, and I could relate to it in many ways. =]

-Jenna.