2 new poems

i have two new poems which need some comments

- Our Miracle
- Consumed by Greed

if u comment both of those i will do 4 of urs, and if u do more then so will i :)

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I'll comment both now, could you just do my 2 newest please?
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They are both great poems hon. I hope a lot of peps read them very enspiring.