(Tetractys) 1 for 3 deal

this is so well written, wonderful job!
could you comment on
-she died with bloody perfection
&
-perfect little girls suicide story
& my newest,
thanks and love
mel

'septic wounds'
'friend or foe?'
'ryan and jane'

comment and vote plz

Sorry about my short comment, a little sad at the moment.. Could you please look at my latest three? Thankss sweetie! xx

Sure-

My three new ones.

Okay, i just did.

Pretty Eyes Made For Crying.
The Stars Had Names.
Shattered Screams.

done...i liked it alot...
do mine
The struggles
why am i here
What kind of father are you

thanks

ok..Done && Done
very good poem:)
can you please do :
"Suicide of the Heart"
"Her Game of LIfe"
&&
"My HERO"
thankyou:)

Done! Nicely written.
Could you do:
((One's a love poem.. If you can't do it, I gave you another choice...Or you can just pick the three you want to do..))

Passion {Palindrome}
Bitter Sweet Revenge {Double Ottava Rima}
Scream {Etheree}
Lost {Palindrome}

xDarkSuicidex

okay Mr. Brian I read your poem. left a comment please do the same on mine, and please honest, good comments. If you dont want to actually tell me more than "good job 5/5" Then dont comment. Anyhoot, that said aside could you check out
Blue Angel
Somewhere Out There
The One I never Loved

allrightee..thanks a bunch
BATMAN OUT
-AL.