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  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    Read my newest poems:
    -The Lady of the Gloom
    And
    -The Whisper of the Dead

    I'll double what comments AND rates you give me... Please and thank you. =]

    CATCH:: Please leave titles...

    xDarkSuicidex

  • Misstress
    19 years ago

    That was a good read..

    An honest comment on my latest poems would be great!

    Thanks.

    God Bless

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    Thank you -- I'll get to your poems asap.

    xDarkSuicidex

    =]

  • Normal is the Watchword
    19 years ago

    solitude

    please rate as well

    can i comment a different one dark poems creep me out

  • Michael D Nalley
    19 years ago

    done

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    Road--
    You can comment any of my poems you want and I'll double it, since you asked nicely. ((Though put it bluntly.))

    Michael --
    I love all your poems and I can't wait to get off and read some now. Thank you.

    xDarkSuicidex

  • Esther
    19 years ago

    Can you just do any on mine! Or just do my recent ones! Although i think i have one or two long poems so u can just do 2 or 3!!

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    Michael ---
    Done. Strong beautiful poems, like always.
    You'll have to look for my comments; I couldn't do the love ones and I had to skip around because I've already rated some of them. Hope that's ok.

    Esther--
    I'm getting on yours now.

    Thanks to everyone so far!

    xDarkSuicidex

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    Esther --
    I think I did 3 of your poems... If you felt it wasn't a fair trade, I'll do one or two more. =]

    xDarkSuicidex

    Thanks everyone!
    Anyone else?

  • Normal is the Watchword
    19 years ago

    I did two of your older ones but I just want to know if you could read my newest and rate as well. You're a good writer and I know ou probably wrote those dark poems a little too well lol

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    'A little too well' ... How is that possible?
    Do tell...

    And I'll do your most recent poem...Thank you for doing the older ones. I appreciate it.

    xDarkSuicidex

  • Normal is the Watchword
    19 years ago

    lol meaning you're a great writer and the poems were probably really dark and I'm assuming really well written. lol they just give me the creeps sometimes.

  • Esther
    19 years ago

    i think it was incredibly fair!!! coz you did good comments! not just one line things which are useless!

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    Road --
    Thank you. =] That's a great compliment to me. I value my dark poems for I've come to realize that and nature poems are my strong suit.
    I did both of your poems...But did you delete some? For I could have sworn you had more than two....

    Esther --
    Thank you as well. I'm glad you like my comments. =]

    xDarkSuicidex

  • Landon Carter
    19 years ago

    Done! And i must say you are the queen of darkness keep writing and share your imagination. As for me. considering the comments I have edited the whole " lifeless life " poem. So i would love a honest opinion. AND you can choose any others from my featured poems.

  • LadyPearl
    19 years ago

    -Falling in Darkness
    -Jade eyes
    -Eyes without tears
    -Prayer

    Tell me which one is your favorite.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    I'll be sure to do this tomorrow if I can.. if not, the next day for sure.

    Noni --
    In the poem 'The Whisper of the Dead' I did mean to use the same rhyming words, but flipped. I really thought it would add to it. =]

    xDarkSuicidex

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    Noni --

    Wonderful poems... Absolutely amazing, as always. My favorite, by far, was 'Jade Eyes'. That poem is amazing...And there is nothing that could describe how amazing. Great job.

    xDarkSuicidex

  • blueknight
    19 years ago

    xDarkSuicidex im done with your two can you please rrc my newest poems

    thanks
    Geneross

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    Done... Thank you for the comments. =] Sorry for the harsh comments.

    xDarkSuicidex

  • LadyPearl
    19 years ago

    Aww...Thank you. Your poems amaze me as well...*I'm jealous* Lol