I dont normally ask this

Im not one who usually asks to be commented on or voted on but I am so proud of my latest poem that I want as many people to read it as posible
Thanks its called "old mans advice" hoping it will inspire teenagers
John

Excellent poem.. You should be proud :] x

well thanks donna
you made an old man very happy

aww pleased to hear it.. with age comes experience, and some very great poetry.. However. Old?.. I don't think so. You are the same age as my dad, and I don't class him as old yet lol It was such an enjoyable read.. well done once again :]

Your right Donna I am not old compared to some but with age comes wisdom and if only one teenager listens and heeds my advice then that would make me extremely happy
Thanks
I have read and rated your latest poem

Thank You so much, I really appreciate it.. I'm sure many teenagers will listen to the advice You have given, it was brilliantly written and very difficult not to take notice, when reading such a beautifully written piece

loved this poem, great advice!! 5/5! any-one reading this go read it!! it is really good! mint! loved reading it and i hope you write more like this!

Thankyou esther Glad you liked it and yes I will keep writing
Bless
John

oops

Can you read and rate Solitude

I have just read Solitude and found it very moving and poeticly correct in every way ...Where on earth did you find such talent and in someone so young thats truly amazing

5/5

I would have given10/5 if i could
John
PS I added you to my favourites

Ive got a new poem called Re-Birth
tell me what you think
John

Wonderufl Poem.
Hope you don't mind my super long comment.
:]

No your comment meant a lot to me not just for the poem but to think I may have helped someone means more to me than anything

What does the L-V mean in your sign in name
I only ask because my surname starts with a V

Kiss Kiss
John
Please feel free to comment on any of my poems

Anyone can comment and rate any or all of my poems and I will return the favour

John

ok

23

can you rate it too

done

Done

Your poems leaves me thinking...

Thanks, check out some of mine if you have time.

God Bless!

Done the first poem..it was fantastic!!!
if you have time could you please vote and comment on :
"Who am I?"
Thankyou =)

Going there now to look at your poems be back soon

I loved your last poem about your mom and gave it a 5 because it made me cry and im a grown man 62 years old

Regards
John

There you go John! =) Could you please do "Remember Her Tears" for me? Thankss. xx

I really liked remember her tears (see Comments)

Well done and keep it up I look forward to seeing more of your work

5/5
John

done! and i don't mind if you don't commented any of my poem, i'll just want you to know, you're just greater than great poet....best wishes.

bert ~

Thankss John! =)

shadow I have commented and voted on your poem hope you like what i said

John

oh my.....thank you so much john..i really appreciated! and i know what you means...but sometimes we have to write them...lol

We all have to do our own thing otherwise we would all be the same and what a boring world this would be then

John

done, a great one.

Thanks goran I tried to comment and vote on your poem but for some reason it wouldnt let me but i will try again later but it was a superb piece and desevedly placed in the top three love poems congratulations
John

hello, I'm in the process of reading your work...

so far I've read:
What a soldier must go through
(sorry for the long comment)
and I'm working on
An old mans advice

great job sir!
*CiaO*

Okay I'm finished...If you could read my two favorites, well the ones that mean to the most to me :

Searching For A New Chance At Life
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Dead Of A Heartbreak / How Can You Still Call Me Beautiful

if there are any others you like, by all means plz read them! =]

*CiaO*

will go read them now

Read them both

Wow Wow wow what talent

Bravo

John

Ps i didnt read the ones you said i just read and commented your latest 2

Anyone else want comments and votes
I dont give 3for 1 or 999 for 1 or anything like that just honest comments and desrved ratings if you look at my poems and give comments it would be appreciated

Peace
John