New Poem (1 for 2 Deal)

Hey everyone! I wrote a new poem called 'Deeper Than A Bottomless Pit' It is a non-rhyming poem...I know, not a favorite of many, but I would appreciate some votes, or any feedback I can get. Post two poems of your own and I will definately return the favor tomorrow! Thank you all so much!

Ok

My two new ones

the luckiest guy part 2
and
late happy birthday

tnx

Nicely done..

Could you do:
My Confession
and
The Window.

Both are love poems, I hope that's ok. If not..Then pick the two you want or post and I'll post two others. =]

xDarkSuicidex

Done..

-True Colors-
-Never a Mute-
( both are short)

Thanks..

Thanks guys!

done..amazing poem!
Could just comment on my latest?
"i don't have a prince?"
Thank you very much!

done...
pls do mine latest two lates poem
YOU AND I AND ONLINE LOVE thanks

My two latest.....also underdeveloped and quickly becoming cliched......I probably shouldnt have written them, but there they are.

Done.

Could you please do.
"One Word"
And
"The Way"

- Megan -

Okie. i like non-rhyming poems : D i think they can add more emotion than rhyming ones at times. if u could do my recent ones that'd be kool : D
xoxox

Done. It was veryyy good. =]
Any of my recent ones commented would be great. Thank you. =]

Thank you everyone. If some of you see no new comments, it is because I've already commented on those poems you've requested.

done....