good deal or what? 4 for 10

hello,

i would love comments on all 4 of my poems below and I will do 10 of yours, but make sure you leave the titles, I won't pick unless i have already done one before.

Love Letters in the sand
Tears in Heaven
Too much, too little, too late
My Fairy brought my angel

thanks in advance

Love and best wishes Tara-Kay

Anyone? Its a good deal, really
The poems are really good, even if i say so myself.

Sure, I'll go read them. =) If you could please do:

Empty
Just A Dream
That One Day
My Point of View
English Class
You Cheating, Lying Dick
That Dirty Whore
My Angels
Just Me
These Scars You've Caused Me

Thanks in advance hun! =) xoxo

Sam, I did them. I didnt do "My Angels" because Ive already commented so I did "You were always there"

And can i just let you know that the poem "Tears in Heaven" isn't about self-harm alone, its about suicide in General

Ok, thanks, Tara. I knew it was about suicide, it just came off to me mostly as self harm, shich we all know eventually leads into suicide. Thanks for the comments. =) You're a great writer. xoxo

Samantha

Love According To An Autistic Child (Written in a point of view of a teen girl with Autisim)

A Special Gift

Bottom Feeder

please rate as well

ok done..i rrc'd all of the ones you said:)
Can you please r r & c these:
"Remember"
"Could it Be...?"
"Suicide of the Heart"
"Lies"
"Hidden World"
"The Devils Grip"
"Who am I?"
"Stop Saying "It'll all be okay"
"Her Game of Life"
&&
"Her Daily Shower"

**and if you've already done one or more of them, please just pick another that you didn't do, Thankyou:)