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nice TITLE! he he he
i wanna have a spot.. PLEASE! i'll try to get it done, but i need some time cuz i'm busy! thankz!

[i'm not sure if it's going to be more than 60 lines, if it will, can i still do it?]

reserve plz!! =)

k reserved and youre acting...yes

you can call me saint...lol. at first i didn't kno wat you were tlking about when u wrote you're acting lol.

tnx

Here's To My Ending On Loving You {Lyrics}
~ by Ciao ~

Here's to the tears you knew I'd cry
Here's to the heartless said goodbye
Here's to the heart you knew you'd break
Here's to the love I knew you faked

There was a time when I knew that it just wouldn't last
There were times when I knew that this would pass
There were the moments when I knew that we were through
Here's to my ending on loving you

Here's to lies I knew you told
Here's to the time that just got old
Here's to memories, watch them burn
Here's to the lessons I'd thought you'd learn

There was a time that I thought that you cared
There was I time I thought you'd always be there
There were times when I thought that this could be
But now all the burden's been shoved off of me

Here's to the nights that I sat up and cried
Here's to the reasons that I asked you why
Here's the life you thought you'd break
Here's to the memories that are just too fake

There was a time that I loved you yet
There was a time I was willing to forget
There was a time that I'd fight just for you
But not after all the crap that you put me through

Here's to boy that made me strong
Betcha didn't see that all along
Hard to see me still standing tall
Hope that it was worth all in all

** About a break-up and a moving on period**

BLOCKED BY YOUR FOOLISH PRIDE

i, I've been lonely for several days
just by myself, it's a price to pay
(i guess, i guess)

i, I've been trying to fight back
fight back this feeling
but nothing is happening
(happening, happening)

you fake that smile, blocked by your foolish pride
but baby i know it's still there inside
i don't want it anymore to hide, please don't hide
tell me you still love me, just like how i did, i tried

i, i know I've been a pain in the ass sometimes
and sometimes i really cross the line
but then you still forgive me, everyday
but doing it again to you, now there's no more chance, no way

i, I've been acting like a mystique
almost copying all of your personality
and suddenly fading away slowly was me

if, if i was suddenly you, why can't i love myself?
we're the same now, no difference between us
but we are utterly gullible to our feelings from the start
in the end what we did was break each other's heart

you fake that smile, blocked by your foolish pride
but baby i know it's still there inside
i don't want it anymore to hide, please don't hide
tell me you still love me, just like how i did, i tried

and, and all the things i tried to give it to you all
not knowing when i have to, i have to fall
you won't be there to catch me,
but staring there watching me
just diiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

what did i do, what did i do
i trusted you, with all my heart
we were meant to be, i know
I'm sorry to say, you have let me go

you fake that smile, blocked by your foolish pride
but baby i know it's still there inside
i don't want it anymore to hide, please don't hide
tell me you still love me, just like how i did, i tried

Can I please reserve a spot, I have a list of poems to get done, and I will add this one, I may need a day or so though. =]

-Jenna.

ok:) lush i havent heard from u in a while how r u?:)

Thanks Darling. I'm alright. And yourself?

-Jenna.

I will not give up
Bye Sarah

Yes you broke my heart
But I will not break down
Yes you took my happiness
But I will not frown

Yes you killed me inside
But I wont die
Yes you don't love me
But I will not cry

Yes you tore me apart
But I'm still in one piece
yes you backed away
But my life will not cease

Yes your words hurt
But I'm moving on
Yes you caused me pain
But I've grown strong

Yes you threw me away
But I am not defeated
Yes you let me go
But I will be better treated

Yes you said goodbye
But I am not alone
Yes you didn't care
But my heart wont turn into stone

Yes you didn't tell me why
But I'll get over it
Yes you treated me bad
But I'm better than shit

Yes you took my dreams
But I wont give up hope
Yes you tortured me
But I will cope

Yes you made me sick
But I'll live through this
Yes you have gone
But I have nothing to miss

*This is about him breaking up with me, even tho I loved him and he broke my heart, I will not give up.

Did What Was Best.

I had to break up with You,
with your insecurities and PMS.
At loving me sweetly,
You were so not the best.

I put up with your beatings,
for way too long.
Although I loved You dearly,
it was time to move on.

I never wanted to hit You back,
I took everything You gave.
The last time that it happened,
I felt myself just cave.

I punched You twice,
to get You off.
You were strangling me,
and I just had enough.

You came back and booted me,
in the face and in the head.
Reality hit us,
our relationship dead.

You walked away sobbing,
I felt like I'd died.
It broke my heart,
how hard You cried.

The person I was becoming,
just wasn't me.
To stop myself changing,
I had to break free.

Never to return,
was the hardest choice to make.
If we'd stayed together,
we both were sure to break.

With your insecurities,
and your PMS.
The loving that You gave me,
was so not the best.

So I said goodbye,
and got my life together.
Have found the sweetest love,
and will be with her forever.

We are good friends now,
almost two years have gone.
We both are in relationships,
my decision wasn't wrong.

Goodbye
---------------

Can't help but remember the good times past
Forgetting the bad, it's gone so fast
You walked away, left me behind
Now you realise, Love's hard to find

She comes to you at all the wrong times
Follows your soul, scours your mind
She never relents, always awake
Causing such hurt, when her you fake.

Look over your shoulder, leave me to cry
Watch from my window, every day you walk by
Flicker of your eyes, remember your crimes
I can't help but remember the good times

A Very Good Lie
by Twisted Heart

It truly was a very good lie
You saying you'd love me 'til the day that you died
But somehow you took that fable away
When you packed up your things and left me that day.

It truly was a very good lie
Each time you wiped away tears that I cried
You'd tell me don't worry, but you knew how I felt
Like sugar in water, My heart would just melt.

It truly was a very good lie
When you said you were faithful, my heart couldn't deny
And maybe my heart had a mind of it's own
When I believed I'd never live life all alone.

It truly was a very good lie
Me willing to trust and give love a try
To finally know these feelings I found
Would be there forever and not let me down.

But, oh I was wrong, when it all fell apart
Leaving debris in the place of my heart
And I hoped and I hoped, but your love went away
Packed in your suitcases and boxes that day.

So now here I sit, My teardrops are gone
Stuck in the shadows, where they belong
My life feels so empty, since you said goodbye
Yes, All you said, Was a very good lie.

broken inside

Push me,
Shove me,
Pull back my brown hair,
Bite me,
Scratch me,
Do as you dare.

Spit at me,
Stand on me,
Just don't break my heart,
Verbal abuse i don't want you to start.

For i am in love with the one who don't care,
I cry so much for him, until he shreds me bare.

The mental pain i carry, is built up inside,
Who can i talk to? To whom can i confide?

No one thats who, so i push it away,
Why when i cry doesn't he hold me? say its OK.

Left alone in the dark, the walls closing in,
Evil, sad, anger crawling through my skin.

Tears on the paper,as she reconstructs her world,
So emotional inside, who's going to help the girl?

The weird girl, the strange girl, the one who cries.
On the bus, in the car, at night in bed as she lies.

She doesn't want to leave him, she wants him to change,
She cries every single night, what is his game?

Valentine's Day
by Silhouette, of something unimaginable

They sit together
on the lover's holiday
cuddling, and smiling
acting lovey dovey
he knows she wants to die sometimes
she thinks there might be someone else
they part in their ways
he goes to the one he loves
she to the one that loves her
she holds the cold metal, his photo
crying why couldn't you love me
like the way you love her
she holds the blade closer
thinking "walk the sidewalk"
she gets closer to her want
he now feels her pain
leaving his lover
he runs down the road
now she is thinking "no turning back"
the blade "walks the sidewalk"
now turning, it "crosses the street"
he reaches her house
tears running down their eyes
she clutches the note
he clutches the nob
just a second too late
she lays there motionless
kneeling beside her
he reads the note
"we both can't get what we want"
he knows, though no one else does.
he now belongs to her
she got her wish
but he shall not
that was her happy ending
but his sorrowful beginning

BUMP BUMP BUMP!!!

not a bad start. keep em coming though! and im fine lush:D

Please Forgive Me
by *tinyheart*

Please Forgive Me....

For Lying To Your Face..
For Going behind your back,
and For Leaving You in this place.

Please Forgive Me...

For Running Away From You
For Going With That Guy,,
And For Denying it Was True.

Please Forgive Me...

For Ignoring Your Pitiful Cries,
For Watching as you Suffer
and For Leaving You To Die..

Please Forgive Me...

For Not Being What You Deserve.
For Deceiving The One I Love.
And For Getting Up The nerve.

Please Forgive Me...

For Telling You The Facts
For Not Avoiding this Confrontation.
and For Not Covering my Tracks..

Please Forgive Me...

For What I've Done To You.
For no Longer Denying it,
And For Telling You It's True

Umm im 97.3% sure this fits, if it doesnt just tell me and ill switch it, but it is about a break up.. so yea. umm idk what im saying. lol
i guess just- i hope you like it. =]]

x.x:Lauren

yeah its fine:)

its fine:)

I just tried to write one, but I steered in a total opposite direction lmao. So, I will write a new one lol.

-Jenna.

You love me no more

I fell into darkness
I cried on the floor
Although I still love you
You love me no more

I believed all the lies
That by you i was fed
All of your words
Still run through my head

I will always see you
In my dreams when I sleep
Although Im broken
You wont hear a peep

I think how im hated
by many not some
With this knife to my wrist
It makes me feel numb

My life is now silent
I feel my blood pumping
I can hear my own breathing
I can hear my heart thumping

With the blade pushed harder
I drag it towards me
The pain makes me sadder
But the feeling rewards me

My life is now over
As I put down the knife
I will always love you
Your the love of my life.

Kay, I have finished one, I don't know how well it goes with break up, so if you want to check it out first and then I can post it, it is called...

Surrender. {Italian Sonnet.}

-Jenna.

Bump

sorry this took so long.. but here it is..

Broken Mirror

*Promise me you will never let go;
You will protect me from the evil,
And cherish the happiness
Can you promise me that?

Darling I love you
I will hold you forever
And I can promise you this
Because you are my life*

Reality struck hard
Taunting images shattered her
Staring into the forsaken mirror
She seen her forbidden tears

*Darling you were my life
I’ve held you, and protected you
But no longer do I love you
Good Bye Akina*

Reality struck once again
Her tears turned to anger
True love turned to insufferable love
And she smashed the forsaken mirror

The mirror had transfixed her
Her image shattered, as was her heart
Never shall she love again
He had broke her for the last time

--terra

its fine lush

Mmkai, thanks! =]

-Surrender.-

A shattered picture frame was laced in tears
Trickling down from Mary's tattered young heart
Your manipulative games tore her apart
Alone under the stars, she stood on the pier
Wondering: "How could he leave me down here?"
She replayed your sick game; from ending to start
Swearing at the moon; she surrendered her part
As the wind chanted tragic secrets in her ears.

The rain fell down and washed her memory away
As your bullet was inscribed into her brain
Blood imprinted in sand; all along the bay
A fallen soul - - letting go of her pain
Heaven welcomed another Angel today
Mary - - with wings drenched from a final bloodstain.

© Jenna Elphick
October 6, 2006.

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Italian Sonnets have 10-11 syllables per line and is composed of an octave (rhyming abbaabba), and a sestet (rhyming cdecde or cdcdcd) or in some variant form, with no closing couplet.

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Bumping :)

Bump again.

-Jenna.

no1 cares about me anymore :'( lol 4 more or 6 days!!

i care :D... lol :P oh yes... well abnout the 5 day contest... I decided it can be an old one. lol
-Terra

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i must be on top:D

Battle to love each other

We onced loved
We once cared
We once held each other through hard times
We once became one
But its over
We dropped dead in our tracks
And walked away from our battle to love eachother
I dont know what happened
I dont know what made us think
We could make it through
I guess we couldnt believe hard enough
To know that if we really dig deep down
We'd love eachother like no other
But I guess we didn't dig deep enough
Or believe hard enough
To find that one wish
To be together forever
So here we are
Different people, seperate lives
Acted as if we never existed
I guess this one didn't work out well
As we had hoped we planned it to be
I guess we had thought we loved eachother
Enough to go through these times
Then must end it all
With a simple drop from a battle to love each other

^^Hope that one is okay!

its fine. im leavin the contest open a few more days..im really upset and not wanting to do anything...except laying around so yeah...please continue..itll go to the 20th now..

I'm sorry Doll. Hope you feel better! =]

-Jenna.

its alright..im a lil bettr 2day....

That's good. =]

-Jenna.