Intercourse Forever (my new explicit poem)

Hiya,
I have tried to write an erotic poem to go in the explicit category, its my first try at something like this so i hope its good and would like some honest comments.
I just spent the night with someone and well you can guess what happened and i wanted to write about my experience.
I will return the favour on 2 of yours
xxxxx
Love Tara-Kay

ok sure, can you do for me
Doll
Conversation of a suicide and a friend

and now im of to look at yours hehe

done!

could you please do:

Heart of love
Lonely...

Thanks in advanced

Hey I did it. Good write could you do
Lets Fu33
Untitled
The next poem i write

O.K... I tried to be honest ... good job for your first try though... when you get time could you give me an honest opinion on "Unwanted". Thanks!