~ Do one of Mine, I'll do three of Yours ~

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Jus like the title says, If you R/R/C one of mine I'll R/R/C three of yours.

The Catch:
LEAVE YOUR TITLES
I don't like fishing.

My Poems:
I recommend:
Trapped In Time
Death.
Death (Part Two)

Closing:
When I feel like it.

Good Luck Babes

Done I commented and rated Trapped In Time.
Very well done.

Can you comment these two:
Stay With Me
Because of You.

Hey I will check it out now. . Can you read
Untitled
More
Stupid Little Girls

Thanks

Gotcha...
Any one else...
I'm really bored...

Live Laugh Love, I voted on your Stupid Little Girls but It wouldn't let me submit my comment...

Whoa! Mad much? I agree some of my friends haven't grow up... and we are sophmores.. I totally agree! Nice title I love it! I like:
Stupid little girls.
Love to play silly games..
One looks like a tweaker bitch,
The other a gap-tooth whore.
Always spreading rumors,
But never backing it up.
Put on a fake smile,
Just so they will shut the fuck up.
This part is awesome...
5/5

Sorry Keep it Up Babe

Hey not a prob. Thanks for commenting it here though. Means alot

Done!
I read Death and Death part two.
They were amazing.
You can check out my comments in your poems

Could you please check out:

I hate you
Little twelve year old lisa
The scarlet blood roses
The winter fairies

Thank you!
Letty

Done!
Could you do
*Deep In The Woods
*Could This Be The Boy?
*Your Heart Belongs With Mine
Thanks
xx

Done

Musky Box of my Mind
Reiver
Pious Junkie
Endangered Species
Autumnal Joy
Ever Increasing Circles
Every Action...
A Life of Time
Resignation

You said one for three so I listed nine.

Thanks

Bret

Letty got you done, this class is ending now, I already did your scarlet blood roses (good btw) but the rest I r/r/c on. Good Job

Everyone else I'll get to you guys after my soccer game this afternoon!

hey i will go comment on some of urs n i would like u to comment on my poems:
peer pressure-just cuz it only has one comment
starfish
and storm of heartache

thnx

LuvSuxGetDrunk: Just finished yours...

Bret: dang boy... I'll start tomorrow after my soccer game (last one of the season)

Ashley I'll try to get you tomorrow aswell

Good Night All

i did 'Trapped In Time'... well just do these three.. thx!

Still in the Silence
Moments in Mind
Words Left Unheard

~angel~

-Childhood plays
-poetry revolution
-Breathe no more

Bret and Angel got you done
Everyone else be on tomorrow

Night all

Hey guys lemme catch up really quick... im might reopen it if im feel like it but right now its closed

Hey Brittney, maybe I intimidate you because my poems make you think about more than just the words written? Either way, I'm greatful for your earnest comments.

I'm also glad you like the last stanza in most of the poems you read. The last stanza is the most important of all. It has to be the strongest or the it will not leave an impression on the reader and he or she will quickly forget your work.

So true,

K everyone I'm all done, i dont feel like reopening... so if you post nother poem for me to read
too bad

Good Luck Babes