First Nature poem. (Ill do 2 of yours)

Right ive acctually wrote a peom that isnt sad! lol. Its called snow children. First time ive written sammat like it. So tell me what you think?
(Ill do 2 of yours as usual)

I enjoyed reading that

please r/r/c ' Hope'

I sent you an e-mail too. Good effort. How does it make you feel to write something new and different?

Could you read Subtleties of Latitude and Musky box in my Mind, please!

cheers,

Bret

i did

just do no direction and my tears

thanksss

Hey all,
Thanks so much for all your comments! I really apreaciate them. Sorry ive been kinda busy lately so i havent replied to any yet but ill get to them as soon as i can.

Michael D Nalley

Elijah

♥JeSS♥ ~Intoxicated Love~

Hey, Sorry for late comment returns but ive done the poems you all told me to do. Thanks for your comments i appreraciate them. :)

Everyone else ill do them tomorow evening hopefully. Ill try and do them earlier if i can. But ive got some stuff to do tomorow so. Hope you dont mind.

pick any two of mine! That one was great!

xxEvilAngelxx

Done=>
Can you do these two

Too Much To Ask
Infatuation.

Done. And I really liked it.

Comment on any two poems of mine, you can pick the ones you like most.
Thankyou

i will read any of mine please i dont mind xxx alex xxx

♥lovemealways♥

Bret Higgins

sweet lig

Done all of yours. Great reads. Thanks for your comments. xx

Bret Higgins: Thanks for the email. I edited the last few lines out. Yeah it felt great to write sammat new. It felt great writing. When i usually write, (there all sad), well i do it to distract myself from either purging or self harming. Its usually what the topic on the poems about. Because of that i dont think ive ever properly enjoyed writing one. My mind is usually just on the thing i crave to do. So it felt great writing it and i managed to write sammat chearful for once. :)

Everyone else: Ill try and do yours later on. Thanks for cthe comments.

xxEvilAngelxx

SouthernღCharm

Done! Great reads yet again!

done!
could you please Rate, Comment on:

Heart Of Love
When You Kiss me...

Thanks in advanced!

Glad to hear it, next time you're thinking of purging or whatever try it again... and again. It should help change your mood and get the endorphines released in a natural and more satisfying manner.

Bret

can u do my 2 featured poems plz? thnx i'll get on urs right now!!

There you go hun! =]

Could you please do "Discovering The Light" && "Slowly Fading Away" for me?

Thankss, xx.

Daisy

ღ girlie_goo ღ

Robie

Done all of yours! :) xx

Robie: Because daisy and girlie goo didnt give me names i thought you hadnt either. So i did 2 other peom and then i realized you left titles. So i went back and did them. Sorry about that. xx

Righ im bumping this thread up so i can comment on peoples poems without doing to page 12. Can someone please ban this person who just put 50,000 messages up?

Right ive done the poems i had left. Whoever will delete all the spam messages can delete this one as well! Thanks for everyone who commented! xx