Last Poem For One month... I will do anything!!!!!!!!!

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    19 years ago

    I will do anything for you to read this poem.
    I Think that it is my best yet, and it sure is my longest. The title is "I Never Will Forget You" and on paper it is five pages long. I hope that you enjoy this. please read it, then comment and vote. Afterwards, i will do anything u ask me to do on your poems, just make sure you say what to do in the comment. I am serious. Please take the time to read this. I will place the link once i post it. I will stop posting for one month after this poem is posted. Thanks.

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    19 years ago

    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=779528

    Here is the link for the poem.

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    19 years ago

    Please reply here also, so that i can match u up with the comment. Thanks again.

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    19 years ago

    Please!!!

  • BeautifulxMess
    19 years ago

    I'm the first to comment! => I must say that was just an amazing poem!!!! can you do a few of these if you havn't done so..
    Mr. Wrong
    Too Much To Ask
    My worse Fear
    Because of you

    rate and comment ♥

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    19 years ago

    I rated too much to ask, but i can't comment on it cause of the login thingy. So i will comment a simple one here:

    Great poem. i can relate to it.
    ~Stevie.

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    19 years ago

    Thanks to the 8 peple who have voted so far

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    19 years ago

    Ditto with the Because of You poem, i can't comment there. I'll comment here.
    Incredible rythm and good use of language. Sad and descriptive jsut the way i like it.

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    19 years ago

    My worse fear:

    Great poem. It seems like we have a similar personality.
    I hope that you don't feel this way, cause i do and i am on the verge of a break down half the time. but keep up the good work!
    5/5

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    19 years ago

    Ok, is no one else interested anymore?

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    19 years ago

    Thanks you 14 people!

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    19 years ago

    15

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    19 years ago

    16
    Thanks again!

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    19 years ago

    Still 16, keep on going!

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    19 years ago

    Woah! Wat is up with all those posts?

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    19 years ago

    Bob? Who is bob! lol?

  • Jenni Marie
    19 years ago

    Done!

    Could you do any of my poems with not very many comments, it would be appreciated.
    Thank you.
    xx

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    19 years ago

    Does anyone mind if i break my promise?

  • LockedInEternity
    19 years ago

    what do you mean break your promise?

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    19 years ago

    exactly!

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    19 years ago

    and i already broke it. So... i am a liar, and i will write a poem in apology for breaking this promise (Not!!! lol)

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    There you go, it was amazing! =]

    Could you please comment && vote on:

    `Fiery Anger
    `Wiping Away The Past
    `Slowly Fading Away
    `Discovering The Light

    If that is too much just tell me! =P Thankss so much, xx.

  • Italian Stallion
    19 years ago

    bump

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    19 years ago

    Ok, well, the poem fiery anger has an extremely good use of words, and actually makes sense. 5/5, and when i am on the friendships poems, i am logged off so i can't comment so i will comment here. On to the next poem.

  • вℓєє∂ιиg.тєαяѕ ♥
    19 years ago

    There you go, could you please do:

    `A Tear Stained Body [Senryu]
    `Tiny Dancers [Haiku]

    Thankss, xx. ♥

  • Arcane Blondie
    19 years ago

    Wow...absolutely amazing poem...it brought tears to my eyes---

    You can do any of my poems that catch your eye, but don't have to do any---

  • xxEvilAngelxx
    19 years ago

    Done. Amazing poem!

    could you r/r/c on my two newest poems? It would mean alot, Thanx!

    xxEvilAngelxx

  • Arcane Blondie
    19 years ago

    bump