CHECK IT OUT!!

plz check out my poem the voice and plz comment on my mistakes or whatever...just be truthful I can handle it!

HI Kaydence, it's a good start. I think you start reading (or continue reading) professional poets and I would recommend FTS Miles, Gary Jurechka and Bob shank on this site also.

Welcome to the site.

Bert

Nice poem to begin! I just did yours could you do these?

Because of you
Sweetest Sin
My Worst Fear
Too Much To ask

hey, did your poem..can you please do my poem
"Who Am I?"
and or
"HIdden World"
Thankyou

Done!
I also would like to welcome you and let you know that I think you have done a wonderful job on your first poem. I also agree with Bret. Keep up the good work!

Could you please check out my poems:

Flowers in the meadow
In the future ( A wedding)
A new guardian angel

Thank you!

Also I want to say that I will be looking for new poems by you so that I can read and comment on them too.

Best wishes
Letty