Feedback wanted

Hi people, I haven't been here in a while, and I have just written a new poem: "Beautifully Disguised". I would really appreciate any kind of comments on it, and by this I mean: thoughts, advice, interpretations, criticism, someone who relates to it... Or you can just say that you liked it or not, understood it or not. All I want is some honest feedback. If you only want to rate it, do so. I don't mind if it's a 1, 2, or 3, as long as it's honest. And let me know if you do, so I can return the favor.

In case you're wondering, I will definitely read and comment on a poem of yours. =)

Thanks to anyone who cares.

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Gaby

Lost!
I read your poem twice, and i felt it. I could relate the feelings. I must say, the feeling is quite well expressed.

I would encourage you to write more on this topic. I would encourage to write about a specific event that led to this feeling in another version of the poem.
Good work!

Thanks!!!

I thought nobody would answer to my post.

I was planning on writing more about the topic, but wasn't sure how. Thanks for the advice. =)

I have already commented on one of your poems, I hope it's worth something. After all I'm still learning, and don't know much about poetry. =)

If you need anything, let me know.

XoXo
Gaby

I hope you like my interpretation.. the poem was written with a lot of inner thought

Wow thank you. I have just read your interpretation and I really liked it, I even saw my poem from a different point of view.

I always like to know the different interpretations that a reader can have about my poems, I think it's one of the things that matters the most. Unfortunately, not many give their interpretations. So, thanks for letting me know. I'm glad that you understood what I really meant. =)

And you were right, especially in this part:

"I can only imagine the trauma of the awareness that no one seems to notice, understand, or care that she cannot feel the warm acceptance of attention, or affection"

I'll read and comment a poem of yours. And I hope to hear from you soon.

XoXo
Gaby

Thankyou Lost for reviewing and commenting on my poem. It is always good to have a feedback. Your comments are good. I have been focusing on rhymes all along. I will definitely try going without rhymes. I would like to increase my ability with vocabularies and applying them most effectively.

I also have that style of writing more on my feelings without a specific event description. I am recently trying to describe more on events and relate my feelings in the poem. It is a difficult task for me as it requires quite clear conception of the event and words to express them.

But thankyou very much for your comments. Would like to see more of your work! Keep writing!