WHEN EVIL HAS WON- (An acrostic Shakespearean sonnet)

I don't think there are many acrostic Shakespearean sonnets so it'll be intresting to see what people think of it. i'd really appreciate it if you read it and leave any comments- possitive or negative. thanx ppl. xmollyxx

Ok I will do :)

Why thanks very much for the lovely comment. it was funny cos i just left a comment on your poem "stick to you guns" a fantastic poem btw. people, you should read it. xmollyxx

Wow yeah i just read that thnks very much for the comment, ''When Evil Has Won'' is also an excellent poem and i advise anyone to check it out

am reading it..

Good work!

Ppl- its not a shakespearean sonnet. each line isn't 10 syllables. i didn't know it has to. xmollyxx