Rate & Comment on my New 2 Poem..plz

I have wrote 2 poems yesterday!
I'd like for couple of people to check them!
They're about "God" and all!!!
I'll try to write some else soon, but for now that all I have!!! :) Enjoy!!!

I did and I like the one I read...:D
Thanx for commenting and rating hun..:)
your sweet...I have wrote other 2...well 1...lol...
check it out if you have anytime oh ok?...hehe...

*For anyone to come to see my poems and quotes
...but really my poems..hehe...Enjoy:)*