Do Any Of These Poems And..

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    Do ANY of these poems and tell me what you think, and I'll double the comments. I only have one or two votes on some of these, and I'd like to see what people really think..Thank you.

    PLEASE:
    Leave titles of the poems you want rated and commented. Thank you.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
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    The Love of Fate
    The W|h|o|r|e
    Lust And Love {Palindrome}
    What Is To Be Believed
    Bind Her {Acrostic}
    The Emotions of Love
    The 'One Man' Show {Terzanelle}
    A Beating Heart; Part 3 {Lanturne}
    The End of the World
    Beauty Of Water
    Purple Lips Upon A Wedding Corpse
    The Heart of Souls
    Innocence
    Helping Hands {CinqTroisDecaLa Rhyme}
    A Beating Heart
    Cannabalism {Double Ottava Rima}
    A Beating Heart Part 2 {Quatrain}

    They all have little comments and votes...I'd like to see what people think...

  • ALEX
    19 years ago

    Perfect Is What We Aim For
    Sayanora, Sweetheart
    You can tell him he's a lost cause in my book
    Choice
    Delusional
    Hero
    Makebelieve
    Thinking thoughts
    Problems solved by telephone

    just pick any.. =)

  • twisted reality
    19 years ago

    Sure I'll do some. Could you please just do:

    `Scarred For Life
    `Rejection
    `The Song
    `Mr. Right (old)

    Thanks hun. xoxo

    Samantha

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    Any one else? I'll get to these in mear minutes, hopefully.
    And you two, I give constructive critism to help you and I honestly say what I think of the poem.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • Synh
    19 years ago

    i'll do some but the only one I want done is Rose In The Dust. You can read others if you like though :)

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    Hm....I'll do these now.

    I'm sorry it took me so long; I've been extremely busy.
    Forgive me.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    Perfect Is What We Aim For
    Sayanora, Sweetheart
    You can tell him he's a lost cause in my book
    Choice
    Delusional
    Hero
    Makebelieve
    Thinking thoughts
    Problems solved by telephone

    All done.
    However, some I couldn't comment on, so I just voted. I hope that's ok.

    `Scarred For Life
    `Rejection
    `The Song
    `Mr. Right (old)

    Done

    The Rose in Dust

    Done
    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    Any other takers?

    I know it looks bad, but you can pick what you want. ^.^

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • xxmichaelxx
    19 years ago

    i did 3 of them! lol. wait....give me a second to pick which one i want you to r/r/c!

  • xxmichaelxx
    19 years ago

    i would appreciate it if you r/r/c my poems that doesn't have any votes or even no comments! thank you! pick randomly if you want!

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    I'll do 6 asap. Thank you for your comments and votes. =]

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex