New poem! [1-2]

Done!
Could you please do

-Tortured mind
-Forever And Always

Thanks
Much Love

~Murder.

There you go, could you do my latest two please? Thankss, xx.

Done.

Could you please do
*I Fell For You
*I'll be with you.

Thanks
xx

any of mine i really appreciate, thanks.

bert ~

Done. Great poem.

Could you do

* Let's Do the Atom Bomb Dance
* I Like To Crush Dreams.

Thanks. :]

Hello Debbie
I have done your poem 'It Wasn't For Me...'it is quite visual...
I would like to request ranking, commenting, criticising my poem 'Dew drops', if possible...
Thankyou!

Thankyou Debbie for the comments. I found it quite constructive. I really need such comments to get a better understanding of my style and how it can get better.
Thankyou again Debbie. I would always appreciate your comments, ranking and criticism on any of my poems. I invite you and humbly request for the remarks.
I will surely return the favour.
Kamal

Hello Debbie,
Thankyou again for commenting/rating/crticising my poems. I definitely need them. I have been writing a lot on my feelings and not on topics. However, that is the reason i am on this site- to be able to learn and grow on my writing.

As such, all sorts of comments are always going to help me.

You are righ! My stanzas need improvement. I also would need to have major improvements on punctuation. Also, I would probably need to clarify the topic to the reader rather than just expressing the feelings in my own world.

Excellent feedback from you Debbie! I would appreciate more feedback from you any time. I will also rate and comment your poems as well. As you request, I will definitely be honest and open. However, they would be my perspective and would probably be amateur one.

Thanks again Debbie!
Kamal