First Contest Ever!!!!!

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Ok im holding my first contest and it is a dark poem contest.

um you have to write about your one true fear, and make me feel that fear.

Rules---

1:Has to be New
2: No plagiarism (spelled wrong -.-)
3:ONly first 5 poems
4: Reserves held for two days.

Prizes

1st: 10 r/r/c
2nd: 7 r/r/c
3rd: 5 r/r/c
4th: 3 r/r/c
5th: 1 r/r/c

Contest ends November 5th

make me scared. good luck

can i reserve a spot

can i reserve a spot too?

Can I please reserve a spot?

-Jenna.

reserve please!

Me pleasee? =P Thankss, should have it done soon.

*Plagiarism.

And I would like to TRY it. =)

-edit-

-Jenna.

uh i got confused on who all was reserved but i wrote a new poem today and want to enter it. if i can be reserved.

nevermind

my poem is a lasting love poem but many have read it and said it was creepy so may i submit it????

I suppose you can if it's not too old.
and since i have more than 5 reserves i bump it up. only those who have reserved can enter poems .

(thanx for the plagiarism spell check ) :)

bump

here's mine....
its my greatest fear...letting go of my love one day...because we're too young and have spearate ways to go...one day...we must let go...that is my greatest fear.

Winds of Change

I’ve started smelling you in roses,
feeling you in the damp, dim evenings,
and seeing you in its lilac dew.

Meaning it was that I’d searched for,
and meaning it was, that you gave me.
This cold oil had never known
that there would come a day, when
your loving flame would kiss my lamp
and thaw my miseries away…
Now amidst your loving arms,
I am draped in peace, and a warmth
that I think my heart has grown addicted to…
The light illuminates, yet warns me,
and I can see the misty road just far enough
to tell me that it’s wise to be scared,
for reality is harsh, and the past tells me
that there are no hands of fate or circumstance
that do not believe in cruelty;
none that do not savor lashing sand-castles
with their unrelenting waves of time.
A semblance of a parting is piercing
so if the winds of fate ever do cruelly blow,
and our time together is set in stone,
I know not what will remain of me…

But I’ll never stop smelling you in roses,
feeling you in the damp, dim evenings,
and seeing you in its lilac dew.

Because I can’t.

----------------------------------------------------------------------
Dhaval

wow that was good.

2 days left people.

reserves are now constant, you're reserves will not go away now.

Omen Of Death

Delicate arms crossed across a chest
Porcelain makeup carefully applied
Dead eyes shut in the eternal darkness
But her breathing spirit does reside..

Laid comfortably against soft cushions
Surrounded by locked wood on all sides
Suddenly awakening; frozen with fear
Panic slowly taking over her insides..

Scratching furiously at her prison cell
Desperately trying to escape or break free
Trapped within a coffin; an omen of death
Alone in the dark she makes her silent plea..

Fear slowly strangling her stunned heart
Oxygen not finding its way to her brain
Crimson eyes emerging from the shadows
Lack of air taking over, making her insane..

Skin emitting its fluids, makeup smudging
Eyes losing focus, a girl fighting for her life
Urgently kicking at the solid wood in tears
Starting to lose hope, a body in torturing strife..

Wood piercingly splintering; dirt crashing in
Mouth filled instantly, eyes painfully burn
Climbing with terror what seems like miles
Reaching the surface, to earth she does return..

Violation

In the dark he came for me
He whispers my name
His hands around my body
They begin molding my frame

Petrified with fright
As he forces me to his liking
Can't fight him off
I can feel myself dying

I cry out and scream
No one hears my call
Forces himself harder on me
Deeper into darkness I fall

Broken and shattered
he'll now take his leave
Not a single soul I can tell
For who would believe?

by Khalabbil

This ends tomorrow? I am sorry I haven't gotten mine in quite yet. I am going to a movie and then I will type it out for ya.

-Jenna.

ok good so far, ends tomorrow

it's sort of not a really good poem but it's a fear i have. and i fear my ex. idk y....

biggest fear it's true

My biggest fear is you
It may might seem stupid but it's true
Loosing you is a part of it
And do you think I ever wanted it?

I wished everyday to be with you forever
But all that does it is to make it never
Does it make sense to you?
Or does it looks like it's not true?

I'm such a sh1t to not let you know
That everyday I want to show
That I really love you to death
Do you even want to make a bet?

i'm sort of sure u wont captivate (oohh...long word)
my fear but at least i admit my fear....lol

-The End.-

Along the shoreline she stands with bare feet,
Her eyes set on the waves crashing on the sand,
She presses her palm to her chest feeling her heart beat,
Walking forward as she tightly closes her hands.

She closes her eyes and takes a deep breath,
With silent tears streaming down her rosy cheeks,
She gasps for air and wishes for death,
As the water fills her lungs and shatters her shrieks.

© Jenna Elphick
November 5, 2006.

-I know it's shotr but I couldn't really think and it's the first one I've written for like three weeks.-

-Jenna.

OK this was my first contest and it was really hard fo r to judge it but here are the results

1st: Omen of Death ~ Miss Huggable
2nd: The End ~ Lush.Fcuk
3rd: Violation~ Khalabbil
4th: Winds Of Change ~ dhaval
5th: Biggest Fear it's true ~ xxkill.elmo.ha.haxx

post what poems you want me to comment on

Wow, thanks! I will post the titles up in a few minutes. =]

-Jenna.

Truest Lies [Acrostic]
White Lies [Haiku]
Crash & Burn [Terzanelle]
Hey, Mr.Jack
Our Homecoming Queen
Bullets Laced In Love [Italian Sonnet]
Innocence

-I think they're all on my featured, there might be one or two that isn't though. Thanks again! -

-Jenna.

congrats winners!!!

WOW.......i never thought i'd win this........*shocked* lol. wow. that's really weird, but THANKZ a lot! that's so awesome. my poem pretty sucked but i guess u liked it lol. THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D :D :D 5th........hell yea!

ok.....i'm dumb.....there were supposed to be only 5 ppl. so i'm the last...lol. stupid me...but oh well....lol