1 for 2, 2 for 3 etc...

Hey all.
Ive got 2 new poems. So can you please leave helpful comments? There both about the same subject so you do these 2 for me and ill do 3 for you.
Or if you do 1 of them ill do 2 for you.

There called:
- Let Death Take You
- A Part of Death

Tips on improving would be great!
Thanks in advance!
xx

hey i commented on your poems
you can do watever ones you want of mine

sara

I r/r/c'd both of those poems. :]

Could you do:
Blood Fondue
Let's Do The Atom Bomb Dance
Ice-cream Love

bump

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Done yours. Great reads. Keep them up! xx

Ill get to evryone elses tomorow hopefully.

i did one of yours, could you do these...

The Night
I Need You Now, Teach Me More

thanks so much!

Anonymous:
Done those three. And added you to my faves because i liked them so much! :) Keep them up! xx

Debbie:
Done!! Wow, i enjoyed reading them. xx

Mousie:
Ok done! Great reads :)

Anyone else?? Im in the commenting mood.