anyone who wants their poems rated...

Hey could you please take a look at my poem "Life's Endeavour" It's just about striving to reach life's goals, and even when it seems impossible, succeeding. Also if you have time could you also have a look at "Bittersweet Vale". It's a little more complicated. It is just basically about the pain of saying goodbye to something beautiful, and the fear of being alone. Also knowing there is nothing you can do about it.
Thanks, i'll surely return the favour.

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Kairi,
Thanks for all the comments, i appriciate it.

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ohh thanx!! could u read my new pem..'broken' ?? and feel free to read any of the others..thanx again:)

want to read any of mine?.....Plz?.....THANK YOU!
-Rach-

Please check out my post, it's called 'my friend has been abused' and it is on this part of the forum.. I would like some comments for a poem about a friend, and it'll tell you why.

Hey, Ive just added my second poem- The Little Boys View (Part 2) check it out please!!!! and if you havnt seen my 1st poem For My Baby, have a look at them please....

thanks heaps!! will be returning the favour!

Cheers, BIRD

i'd appriciate it if you would vote and comment on any of my poems, thanks

hey i read 1 of ur poems..... i think its great! could you read mine? its called I Have Bled...