First Poem ♥

Okies, can you please comment && rate on my poem:

`A Tear Stained Body [Senryu]

All favors are returned =]

Thankss, xx ♥

I have just added a new poem called:

`Tiny Dancers [Haiku]

[See if you can figure out what it is talking about =P]

done. Absolutely brilliant
Look forward to seeing more of your work

Thankss sweetie && all done.

Anyone else?

i did both, could you please do :

"Her Game of LIfe"
&&
"Hidden World"

&& if youd rather read a love poem..try "our life"...thankyou

done. any of mine will do. It's your choice =D

xxEvilAngelxx

I just did the other one (the haiku) and i wanted to say: Great job!

xxEvilAngelxx

Okies, all done! =]

Anyone else?

I have commented & rated all three of your poems.

Could you please do:
So Called Friends
Anymore
Mistakes & Memories

Thanks heaps hun. =]

Tammie.

okay I'll do it.

Please do

-Idle Minds
-Untitled-
-Through The Fire

&&

-My Dream