No Rhyming

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Winners
1.. .ღ.Beautiful Disaster.ღ.
2.Ciao ××
3.? *e-con[allineare].viene-il[dolor
4.Twisted Heart
5.xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Reserve, please. Thanks

Happiness
Jeannie

Reserve please.

-Jenna.

I hope this is ok. I wrote this awhile go, so it is not my best, but I always rhyme. Enjoy.
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Love Stops For No One

Yes my dear,
But love stops for no one,
It sneaks up on you,
And holds you forever.

You have to admit,
You love loves tender hold,
Never letting go of you,

As if holding you safely forever.

And soon you'll find yourself,
Addicted to love's hold,
Wanting it forever,
To never let go.

And forever love will stay,
Living fast and living strong,
Never letting go,
As it plays their song.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

reserve please...
I think im gonna use one i already have but ill get back to you.

xxEvilAngelxx

no more than 25 syllables per stanza??!!?
I request that you change that rule... plz?

Holding Her Hand

They hold hands,
Like the happiest people in the world...
For they are in love,
And I stand in a crowd.

He pays no heed to my existence
And in conclusion, holds her hand...
Fondled with infatuation,
My boyfriend holds her hand.

And when we lie together, he thinks
(Young minds traveling between worlds)...
Alas, his is not on knowledge.
A princess was found; far better than me.

Horrified I stood. For then I saw it.
The portrait will always be broken
Yet, my mind...will always dwell on what they had
And the way he holds her hand.

My heart shattered.
A thousand pieces hit the floor.
I cried trying to glue them back together,
But the blob just broke again,
Because my boyfriend...He walked away
Holding her hand.

[Check that it fits. I hope.]

Never Eternity

I can see you,
Far in the distance.

I hear your breath coming closer to me.
In every second that passes,
I feel the warmth you can lend me.

And I know that when we meet,
We will never separate.
I hesitate,
But your words keep me going.

Only a few steps left to eternity.
We are so close,
I almost break in yearning.

And finally we touch.
You and I are now here,
Together,
Forever.

Yet no,
Forever does not last.
There is no forever.
Only one thing can part us.

Death, everlasting death.

It takes you,
And I have no choice but to follow.
For without you,
I can not live.

I changed mine a bit. It does fit the 25 per stanza rule.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

I just changed mine too, but it was a pain... lol.

xxEvilAngelxx

i wanted to enter, but each of my stanzas have like 30 syll. sorry...

HAH! yus! i just wrote one. i hope you like it.

Surrounding my entire life
Memories of how
My innocence was stolen

Broken memories of you,
Corrupting every thought
You stole my innocence.

x.x:Lauren

this is sort of complicated but awesome! reserve me!

Shattered Dreams

I gave You my heart
You promised it protection
Then took it away

We planned a future
Fantasies and dreams were close
They soon were shattered

Love of perfection
Soon became non-existant
My heart sobs for You

Glass Heart
By: Twisted Heart

The glass menagerie
tainted by the amber glow
Of lost dreams

Humbled by the winds
of the changes of the times
Now sits in slumber

Upon a shelf of neglect
covered with the webs of pain
It cries in silence

Releasing the thoughts
of a lost love that was forgotten
Never to be found

The shivers causes it to fall
into the harsh reality of cold's embrace
Tiny pieces scatter.

Now broken promises
are evident in the many pieces of glass
That lie upon the soul.

I would like to enter please :]

Shades of Black [Quadruple Senryu]
by Ciao ××

Shades Of Black
Running Down From Her Eyes
Crying So Softly

Shades Of Black
Something That She Hides
She Is So Afraid To Show

Shades Of Black
Mixed In With Crimson Blood Red
The Pain Is Released

Shades Of Black
No Longer Their Problem Girl
Now Only A Soul

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A Senryu has the same structure as a Haiku, (A poem with a syllable count of 5/7/5) but instead of the focus being on nature, it is on human emotions. This is usually only one stanza, but it may have more.

Finding happiness in his sleep,
that life doesnt supply.

The pain that continually bears down,
never releasing
never easing.

Pulling him deeper
into a further slumber,
hiding him away from the world.

He doesnt realize in his dreams
everything is unrealistic,
his happiness and joy
when he wakes,
exists no more.

Lost in a reality
of depression and fantasies
waiting for nightfall
when he lives again...

(C) 2006 Bryce Dressler

(just one i made up earlier...)

I changed my name (I was hopeless romantic)

Ciao xx

Regret

No matter how much you try to let go of things
it always comes back to you
no matter how much you try to forget about the past
you can never move on
its always on the back of your mind
you cry every night
wishing the pain & regret can just leave
But instead it chooses to stay and hurt you deep inside
even though all is forgiven
you still feel the pain
you ask yourself why
as the tears run from your eyes
and find yourself clueless again
looking dumb founded
staring at this girl in the mirror
staring back at you
her eyes full of hatred
and tears full of sorrow
not knowing if she still wants to live

*i did not really understand what you meant in the rules but i hope this is okay

Bullet IN my Heart

Stay low, so low
That the rain in my heart won’t touch
The loneliness
The darkness
Creeping in and out upon my
Shattered core

Searching in the midnight sky
Where stars shine upon my
Hollow dreams
Narrow screams
Underneath a quilt of sorrow
I see no tomorrow

Like a hole piercing through
An already…empty heart
Crackling
Ripping
Hear the veins untwine
Hear my angel whine

The world travels like a blur
In hues of black and white
Confusing time
Losing self
In a fading portrait of lines
Stripped by the howling winter wind

This bullet, pumping along with my heart
An illusion perhaps, but still always there
Never healing
Never scarring
Leaving lost loneliness to defend alone
Stay low, so low, that death will pass just like pain

Lies and Deciet

With kisses tracing her red, red lips
Immersed in the lies and deciet,
She steadily slid her hand over the locket
Heir to a kindgdom, covered in tears

Thoughts of failing, failing her king
Hid within her smile
Into her pale, pale white skin
She pushed away her fears

Together forever? were those his words
Or were they simply syllables
Before her eyes, he whispered her name
Everlasting?... or just more lies

Over and over, it goes through her mind
Vowing to be there forever
Everlasting... or were her
Red, red lips, emmersed in lies?

... -idk not my best work... but it shall work for now

-Terra

I will not post

...this is the last day?

damn.......i hdon't have it......

unreserve por favor

bump

I am pretty sure this was forgotten...

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

i go to school with khallabil, or however you say her name, i'll remind her tomorrow

Lost With You

I'm losing myself in you.
And I forgot I was my own person,
But I don't mind.

Isn't it wonderful to be here
Combined into one, despite
That we are still two people

We're kind of like a maze,
And I don't want to find my way out.
I'd rather stay lost with you.

Cause it's better to be lost in love
Then to find my way out of it
And never see you again

So baby, stay here with me
In the puzzles of our feelings
The only way out is with you.

By: Charisma

(Hope you like it! I didn't reserve, but there were open spots so I hope you like it.)

what happened here?

Is it gonna end... ?

I sent her a comment

sorry my dad's computer broke down and its the only one we have in the house

Winners
1.. .ღ.Beautiful Disaster.ღ.
2.Ciao ××
3.? *e-con[allineare].viene-il[dolor
4.Twisted Heart
5.xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Omg, I won first place? Wow, thankies soo much! Aww thanks! Congrats everyone!!!

yay! second! great job winners!

I dont want to sound like a sore loser or whatever.. but wasnt it stated in the rules each stanza couldnt have more than 25 syll? yet some of the winners did.. hrm.. i did know if you changed the rules.. i wish i would have, casue i would have changed my poem. =]

Thank you very much. Not one of my best; I tend to like to rhyme...But, thank you very much. =]

Congradulations to everyone else!!

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex