4 for 1

Hi
I have been trying out some new styles and would appreciate some comments on them. I wrote them a whilse ago but am not so sure now so would like to test the water with *Panthera Leo*

If you would be so kind as to r/r/c I will return the favour on 4 of yours.

Please try to be honest and constructive. If you like it (or not) please tell me why and how it could be improved.

If you leave titles that would help as I am rubbish at choosing but if you don't mind pot luck then fair enough.

*BE WARNED* I will leave honest feedback which may appear harsh but it is my opinion on what you wrote. I refuse to follow sycophantic fan worship and if I don't like a poem then I'm afraid I will say so and vote accordingly

*IF YOU DO NOT LIKE THESE TERMS THEN PLEASE DO NOT R/R/C MY WORK*

Thanx
:)

Awesome!..

You really know your stuff about lions..
Scientific name, habits, hunting preference, name of group.. wow.. you had it all.. Things I knew.. (except the proper name) but I'm sure a lot of people didn't know that..

Wildwood flower
Single White Rose
Ivory Falls
A Butterfly Effect

alright done..could you please do:
"Black Widow"
"Remember"
"Language of the Dead"
&&
"Quiet Ocean"
Thankyou

hey i commented on yours! it was really good, i'm not sure if my comment will make sense at all:) but ah well...
1)the story behind her smile
2)memories
3)better left unsaid
4)making me fall

thanx a million!

Sure

Tonight...I Feel
Dark Dwellers
Sacred Place
Marry me, Your Dead bride

Thanks for all the comments they wer really helpful
I am staarting to review yours now
:)

Darien Done: Great work as always

Done.

Could you please just do my latest I can't take it anymore.
I wont ask any others because this one is my 100th poem and extremely long.

Thank you
xx

Done: roadandtheradio
my.love.4.u.is.endless
Emily

done could u plz do my 4 most recent ones plz

done! could you do my 4 most recent ones plz too =D

There you go hun. =]

Could you please do:

`Glistening Skin [Parquette]
`Releasing Bliss [Malisus]

And two of your choice!

Thankss, xx.