One For Three

Okay, I just posted my 100th poem on this site.
I would appreciate it alot if people could read it and tell me if they think my writing has improved since my first poem, and how it has improved and what else I can do to make it even better, or if my writing has stayed the same or gotten worse and why.

I'll tell you now though, it is extremely long and very sad, I cried while writing it.

I will vote and comment on three of your poems, just leave the titles.

Thanks guys.
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Done!!! Enjoy that comment I posted!! haha

If you could please read..

Right Here
Assisted Suicide
A Story of True Love

Thanks :)

Done and thank you =)

Anyone else?
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Anyone?
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done. read r/r/c/ these if you will:

As I Walked Across This Bridge Of Dreams (revised)
An Angels Rose
The Awn

Done!
Anyone else?
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done urs,
plz do

empty
why am i still here
&&
please come home dad

thnx

Omg, that depressed me so bad. Wow. It was just so so so sad...

Could you please do:

`Glistening Skin [Parquette]
`Releasing Love [Malisus]
`Omen Of Death

Thankss. xx

Life's Induction... thanks.

Thanks for the comments, guys, I will get around to yours, it just may take a few days as I am really busy atm.
Thanks for your pateince.
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k, I commented.

Good Job, hun. :]

I have returned some of the comments, I will keep going tomorrow.
Thank you again for patience!
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Okay, all done!
Anyone else?
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