One For Three

  • Jenni Marie
    19 years ago

    Okay, I just posted my 100th poem on this site.
    I would appreciate it alot if people could read it and tell me if they think my writing has improved since my first poem, and how it has improved and what else I can do to make it even better, or if my writing has stayed the same or gotten worse and why.

    I'll tell you now though, it is extremely long and very sad, I cried while writing it.

    I will vote and comment on three of your poems, just leave the titles.

    Thanks guys.
    xx

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Done!!! Enjoy that comment I posted!! haha

    If you could please read..

    Right Here
    Assisted Suicide
    A Story of True Love

    Thanks :)

  • Jenni Marie
    19 years ago

    Done and thank you =)

    Anyone else?
    xx

  • Jenni Marie
    19 years ago

    Anyone?
    xx

  • Kalgalath
    19 years ago

    done. read r/r/c/ these if you will:

    As I Walked Across This Bridge Of Dreams (revised)
    An Angels Rose
    The Awn

  • Jenni Marie
    19 years ago

    Done!
    Anyone else?
    xx

  • ~*×FaÐ3D‡‡M€mØ®Ïê§×*~
    19 years ago

    done urs,
    plz do

    empty
    why am i still here
    &&
    please come home dad

    thnx

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    Omg, that depressed me so bad. Wow. It was just so so so sad...

    Could you please do:

    `Glistening Skin [Parquette]
    `Releasing Love [Malisus]
    `Omen Of Death

    Thankss. xx

  • ReBecca
    19 years ago

    Life's Induction... thanks.

  • Jenni Marie
    19 years ago

    Thanks for the comments, guys, I will get around to yours, it just may take a few days as I am really busy atm.
    Thanks for your pateince.
    xx

  • Teria
    19 years ago

    k, I commented.

    Good Job, hun. :]

  • Jenni Marie
    19 years ago

    I have returned some of the comments, I will keep going tomorrow.
    Thank you again for patience!
    xx

  • Jenni Marie
    19 years ago

    Okay, all done!
    Anyone else?
    xx