please

i'm a guy and i want to know if i can write worth a shit. read a poem of two and leave a comment, please. thanks.

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Sure will...
Though, telling by the way you write on here, I'm going to guess that not many people have checked them out so far for the simple reason that you...swore, within the first sentence...
In real life slang and stuff I really don't mind, but I've found that it turns me off to know that someones vocabulary is so undeveloped they rely on swearing... Not that that's how you are, but that's the vibe that comes off.
So not to get on your bad side before I even check out your poems, but I thought you might like to know one stop in gaining more comments and votes. Good luck! I'm on my way to read your writes now -be warned, I'm honest.

^I agree. Don't awear in poetry, unless it's under explicit as well. I'll check your poems now.