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Great Job on your poems, hun.

If you could comment, for me,

1.Take Me As I Am.
2. Dreams Of Hate.
3. Dark River.
4.Good Memories Leave The Toughest Scar.
5.Me and You.
6. In the Midst of the night.

Thanks in advance. :]]

Could you give an honest critique on

"To be a Touretter"

Thanks. I will flick over to yours now.

Very nice job on 'Dear Daddy.'
If yu` could do :
`All I Ever Wanted .
`I Want This Boy ...

Thanks, hun` .
..ღ__MiNDYY

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Thank you very much and I loved your poem "Dear Daddy"

me?

please do my new ones........

oh sorry i already did them,lol

ME ME! lol

Could you please do:

The House Of Doom [Double Tetractys]
Remeniscing On A Troubled Past
So Called Friends
Anymore

Thanks heaps!

Tammie

Done.

Can you please do

*The Inner Monster
*The Body
*The Good Thnigs In Life
*My Watery Grave

Thank you
xx

This sounds like a good deal... Enjoy.. I hope. If 'Gay Pride' is too contreversal, please, just pick something else and don't downrate (though I doubt that's like you.) =]
OH, and fear not, most of these are short or median length!
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`I Am A Lie {Malisus}
`Winter Tree {Haiku}
`Wax Butterflies2 {Shakespearean Sonnet}
`By the Lipstick {Parquette}
`Wax Butterflies
`Gay Pride {Ottava Rima}

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I had to skip around because I can't do love or friendship poems...but they're all there. I promise. =]

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please read rate and comment on my latest poem

"How many Ansestors"

"Original Sin"

hmm why not. Can you do my featured list? I will work on your 2 right now. There is only 4 in my featured list. Please and thanks. =]

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