Wrong and Right

Please please please please comment and rate this poem I'll comment and rate THREE poems!!
The title of the post is the poem just post in the thread the three poems.

NO ONE LINERS!

How many Ancestors?
Original Sin
What is It?

Done!

Could you please RAte, Comment on:

Death...
All i want...
Your eyes...

Thanks in Advanced!

Micheal thank you for the alerts on the typo's
I went and re-did all of my mistakes. Thank you vey much. And so to you^^.

Anyone Else?