GOOD DEAL! First Ten People!

  • Jenni Marie
    19 years ago

    Could people please comment on

    *I Write Because
    *Tell Me
    *I Miss You

    No one liners please.
    I want to improve my work and I can't do that with one liners.
    If you give ma one liner expect the same in return.

    In return I will do six of yours.

    Leave me the titles here, I don't like fishing.

    Thank you.
    xx

  • goddess-glamourpuss
    19 years ago

    Done.

    I tried to be constructive and hope you find my comments helpful.

    *vampire kiss
    *time for tea
    cuckoo in the nest
    *bogeyman fred
    *fall from grace
    *ode on a muse

    thanx

  • Edward D Zurovec
    19 years ago

    Done them all,,,

    I'm sane,,comment me!
    Dustin
    Little Bar Eyes
    Tossed Love
    Showered Dreams
    Tusconi Lore

    thanks

  • Brittany C
    19 years ago

    You are a great poet.
    Could you read:
    Killing Me Slowly
    Dark Oman
    My Dear Love
    A Dreadful Mistake
    While I Wait
    and Take That Chance
    Thanks

  • Brittney Follett
    19 years ago

    Haha, I say that. :P its all cool, I hate fishing too :).. Can you do:

    Warped n Twisted
    Death's Mistress
    Angel of Fire
    Trapped In Time
    Into My Head
    Chaotic Mind?

    Thanks Babe, I'll get to yours now.

  • TheWorldFellNUWerentThere
    19 years ago

    Okay.

    Please do

    - If I Wrote A Sad Song

    - How Much I Cared

    - Forever Gone

    - I`m Sorry

    - My Dream

    &&

    - Untitiled-

    And I will do your three.

    Thank-you.

  • Jenni Marie
    19 years ago

    I have replied to some, I will continue tomorrow, I am really busy at the moment.

    Edward D Zurovec, I couldn't find the first one, so if you leave me another I shall do that.

    Fire-lilly, I am halfway through yours, I shall continue tomorrow and then work my way down the list.

    I will get round to them all, it just might take a day or two.

    Thank you for your patience.

    Anyone else?
    xx

  • Brian
    19 years ago

    I am off to read yours now :)
    Mine are:

    Until All has gone
    A Loneliness inside
    Petal less Rose
    My Hell
    Just for You
    Princess of My Heart

  • Jenni Marie
    19 years ago

    All done.

    Foяeveя♥, I have already commented on My Dream before, so I chose another one to do.

    Anyone else?
    This is closing after two more people.

    Thank you.
    xx

  • donna
    19 years ago

    Done :] Could You please do my newest Thanks x

  • Idiosyncratic
    19 years ago

    I'll get right on it!

    Please do my six newest:

    The Future of a god
    An Uneven Cry
    The Ballad of Lost Hopes
    Prelude to Extinction
    Let's Heaven Here
    Happens

    Thanks!

  • Jenni Marie
    19 years ago

    All done.

    CLOSED.

    xx