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Hey, I have a new poem which I would like feedback on please, it's called "In My Name." I'm hoping it's fairly understandable (compared to my usual writes) so don't be afraid to be honest, that's what I want.
Also, any feedback on my other writes would be appreciated.

I will return all comments (over 2 lines) asap. Just leave the title/s here.
Thanks.

Done and great one
Happy Thanksgiving

Please do
Little Bar Eyes and WOE

all done, great job, by the way.

and happy thanksgiving.

i don't really mind which one you do.

Very good poem great job:)

Could you please r/r/c "A Dreadful Mistake" and "His Touch"

Thanks

Thanks everyone, I've returned the comments.

I'll do it now
please do any of my newest