One Day Contest!!!!

CLOSED!!!! RESULTS AT BOTTOM!

CHANGES: Will be judged at 5 tonight instead of 4 to give an hour or so extra to the reserves, and last minute entries...so if you want to, ENTER!

This is a simple and short contest seeing as it is our first one. This is CharismaticCountryGirl and Midnight Sun holding a contest on our joint account name which is TimidOutburst.

It is a title contest. The catch is there is one title for everyone so we can judge your talent fairly. It can be any genre accept explicit or about self-mutilation. And try not to be too dark. We want talent here not vampire stories!!! :)

Rules:
1. Must be longer than 12 lines but no longer than 40 lines.
2. Must be admitted by tomorrow, Saturday, December 2nd at 4:00 p.m.
3. MUST RHYME!
4. No profanity!
5. HAVE FUN!!!!!

Drumroll please......

Your Title is........

"Longing for Unspoken Words"

AWARDS:
1st Place-7 comments from each of us!
2nd Place-5 comments from each of us!
3rd Place-3 comments from each of us!

Get writing and have fun with it! Results will be posted after 4:00 pm tomorrow!

Reserves:
Bryan
Twisted Heart

Done:
[Baby]Blue[Baby]Blanky
...Me...
*¤TheJohnston¤*
SXE~Skittl3z

reserve me a spot please

Longing for Unspoken Words

Look at me; don’t you see these sapphire tears?
The splatter on the wall is from my torn heart
your drunken aim has struck me with the dart.
Once again I ask myself, what has the years
brought upon you? Now look at all my fears;
The Unspoken words could help us restart
But This bottle, has taken us, ripped us apart
Now beside my bed, you are in my prayers

Listen to me; don’t you hear my trembling voice
Can you not see my running mascara?
Within my hands, are the unspoken words
I am your daughter, remember, I’m Terra?
Dad, you are my only chance, my only choice
and you hold my justice for unspoken words…

-Terra

If we are allowed to reserve, Please save me a spot.

Thanks
Jeannie

Ok. So my title is the same. I only put the brackets there, because when I post this in my list of poems, I plan on titling it that... Perhaps... But if it bothers you, I'll take out the word, and leave it as is... Thanks for the contest! Good luck everyone!

Longing For (three) Unspoken words.
By Stefhy

I can see your brown eyes swimming,
Through deep waters in your mind.
Looking for the answers,
In the questions you can't find.

Take your unborn letters
And weave them side by side.
Patch up my tired soul,
With the words you could confide.

The beating in my chest
May slow to frozen pace;
If you can't soon return,
The feelings that I face.

I watch your sad lips tremble,
You're holding back your love.
But the love that you are hiding,
Has a pain I cannot shove.

Watching as you struggle,
To reveal your heart to me
I long for the unspoken word,
But I have to let you be...

"Longing for Unspoken Words"

‘Longing For Unspoken Words,
The Truth To Be Said,
To Save A ‘Loved’ Ones Life,
Yet You’d Rather Lie Instead.’

To Cause Her Suffering,
And See Her In Pain,
To Feel Her Emotions,
You’d Do It All Again.

Knowing That She Hurts,
Like What She Did To You,
Will Make It All Better,
After What You Went Through.

‘Longing For Unspoken Words,
That Simply Were Not Said,
To Pass The Time Of Destiny,
And Free What Has Not Fled.’

Sympathy Of What You’ve Lost,
Is What You Need Inside,
But Yet You Want Revenge,
For What You Were Denied

Secret Reasons Why She Left,
To Make Her Look Right,
But It Was Her That Broke Your Heart,
As She Smiled In Delight.

‘Longing For Unspoken Words,
With A War Left To Pursue,
Longing For 3 Simple Words.,
Meaning I Love You.’

Hope You Like It.
TheJohnston;
( L )

These are great people! Keep 'em coming!

please reserve spot

Longing for unspoken words
You are the cure
My time here seems obscure
for your absence leaves me parched
Your soul has been in aligned with a crime for quite some time
And now I have come to claim what is rightfully mine
You took my heart
and shamefully I let you
Only leaving the shattered pieces scattered for you to recollect
then mend
break them once again
Take it and spend it once more
treat me like a trophy
For that is what I am to you
Once I was the one you adored
I soared in the satisfaction that came from your company
We would watch the sun rise and the moon set
time went by
and the sun would set
I let you take me willingly
Although you never said it
I knew how you felt
My heart would beat
and I would think it as I unfastened my seatbelt time after time
Maybe I was just blind
because my mind was just focused on you
Next time you come back to me
I will think of those words that will always be left unspoken
Because those words are not one of your emotions
I am the one who cared
you were not there
all I ever wanted was for you to mean one thing
and that is for you to say that you love me

Hey guys,
So far everyone's doing a great job...and we decided to move the poem back another hour so we'll judge it at 5:00 tonight. This gives a chance for anyone already reserved and for any last minute entries....have fun!

Longing For Unspoken Words
By: Twisted Heart

Again, I'm sitting here alone
With words that's left unspoken
Three simple words I wish to hear
To heal this heart that's broken.

So easy would they be to say
But until you let me hear
I'll not repeat those simple words
Whispered in your ear.

I've said them once, awhile ago
You laughed at such a thing
Not realizing for your action
The heartache it would bring.

Into the night, dreams now haunt
Of words that fell from grace
Upon the lips there is a hunger
That time cannot erase.

So now I wish upon the moon
For stars are lost and broken
Wishing for the simple words
That was left unspoken.

****Sorry it took so long, Had a family emergency.

Thanks
Jeannie

RESULTS:

1st Place: ...Me...
2nd Place: Twisted Heart
3rd Place: *¤TheJohnston¤*

Congrats to all! Everyone who entered did a great job! Thanks for the support! We are looking forward to doing more contests in the future!

this is Charisma, and I finished my comments on ...Me... and am now doing Twisted Heart, then *¤TheJohnston¤* and should be done by the end of the night! Congrats again to you winners!
Charisma*

Wow...
third place.
I guess thats good.

Ummm You can comment on my latest poems.

thanks,
TheJohnston'
( L )

Just finished everyone's! You guys all have such amazing talent. It was a pleasure to read!
Charisma*

Thanks alot for the comments, Charisma [still want to call you Jpoet]. Much appriciate second place. Congrats to the other winners.

Happiness
Jeannie