Up for the challenge. Read one earn five!

Alright I am setting up a challenge for everyone here. I am looking for good honest comments on my two newest poems. If you leae a comment I feel is worthy of being considered what I am hoping for, you will earn up to five comments per good one you leave on my two poems. That means earn 5 for reading one or 10 for reading two. The catch, if you leave a one liner or something I feel does not touch on what you thought of my poem, how it made you feel, what you liked, what you thought, what it lacked, you will earn one simple comment from me per poem you read. Write one line and this time I mean I will leave one line back.

Hi, I read, rated and commented on both of you new poems. You asked for Honest comments, so that is what I gave you, please don't feel that I am bashing out on you, I just gave you an opinion, my opinion on what I thought about your poems.

Ciao, Joe

Well I'm up for it :)

~ Can you do my:
1. Death.
2. Death (Part Two)
3. Trapped In Time
4. Chaotic Mind

If you have already done some, then don't do 'em again. Death's are long so I give you four poems to read ... and maybe less then that if you read em already :)

Thanks Babe, I'll get on one of your poems.

Ok done, I read, rated, and commented on your two new poems. I told you the truth of what I thought about them. I thought that they were great:)

Please read any 10 of my poems that you have not read yet. I tried my best to give you the type of comments you said that I should give others.

Thanks:)

Alright because I thought you guys did well in the comments you earned them and I will try and get most down tonight if not all by then then the rest tomorrow.

lol THe lines I think in one wa sjust to center it how it is on another site without the lines and sorry about the vocab that's how it naturally is and sometimes I don't think of making it simple.

NOT FAIR! =[

I already did them both and left good comments (At least I thought they were...)

Now I can't do it. =[ ((Sadness))

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

I'm actually writing a new one which should be up hopefully tonight or tomorrow.

I am so sorry I've been so busy : S

I did ur newest poem also with a lenghty good comment so just comment 5 first five featured poems thanks Karl Wild