3 for 1 deal!!!

comment any one of my poems and i'll do three of yours, you can do more than one, i'll triple it, but no more than three! i'm bored and stressed out of my mind, and i need something to relax me... thanks so much!!!!

xxMousiexx

come one ppl!!!!

Done . Could you do :

`Please
`Don`t
`A First Kiss

Thanks .

done thanks so much!!

Hey ill do your now, plz comment on my newest 3
dont worry about the rest!
Love Steph

anything man ill do some of urs i no how it is to be stressed out

Done. I did "Us".

Could you please do my newest three. Thanks so much. Hope your feeling a little less stressed now. =]

Tammie

Hey!.. I read 3 of your poems..

if you could read a few of mine, that would be great!

thank you all, your comments were greatly appreciated. i'm off to do all of them right now.

Darien- on the first poem you read, i'm not sure how you were getting the no love and passion thing, if you go back and read the explanation at the bottom i just put, maybe you'll understand. it was supposed to be something that might happen in the future when my b/f and i are in college and far apart and don't see each other much and he just shows up at my door with flowers unexpectedly and wisks me off my feet yet again. that's what the first stanza is supposed to give off, at least a little, i know it's kind of mysterious, but i like it when ppl form their own stories in their minds. the last stanza is supposed to convey undying love, that we'll never part, the last line "Never to say goodbye"... it's supposed to show we've been together for so long, we're so in love, nothing will ever cause us to part. i don't know, maybe if you go back you'll see that, if not, thanks for that comment and all the other great comments you gave, it really was just an experimental poem.

hey guys, i have a concert tonight, so i'll either do them tonight after i get home (got lots of hmwk to do too) or i'll do them tomorrow afternoonish... thanks so much guys!!

done.

could you please do that for

Eloquence
Crossing The Line Between Pleasure and Pain
V.o.m.i.t.

thanks!

i'm done finally!!! thank you all for the comments, sry i was so late getting back to you. i was really busy last night. beautiful job all of you!!!