Darling, When You Stand In The Moonlight {Terzanelle}

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    You know the deal.
    Leave one or two titles.
    No love or friendship, please.
    Enjoy. =]
    And yes, it repeats itself, but I like that. Enjoy.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • awww
    19 years ago

    done.. just do this one.. its my first dark poem..

    The Faded Light

    ~angel~

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    Debbie--
    I'll look over what you said, but I must disagree. Some people have a different view of types of poetry and different sites say different things. I got mine from Shadowpoetry.com...And that's how I've always writtena Terzanelle.
    I hate to be picky, but I loved how it turned out and I really don't want to edit.
    So, if you ever come back here and see this, could you do the me huge favor of going off of what -my- Terzanelle guidelines are. And if you did, you have no idea how much I appreciate you. I'll change it immediately. Thank you so much for taking the time to look over it and the style, as well. =]

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • Sweet lig
    19 years ago

    yes its done nice work!
    would u also do my poems i return the favor thanks

  • dollwithafrown
    19 years ago

    Done. Nice work.

    `Think of Them on Christmas
    `Life is a Highway

    Please and thanks.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    Thank you, everyone. I'll get on these within the next few days.

    Debbie--
    Thank you very much for looking into it. I was honestly frightened I had been writing it wrong all along. Glad you liked it. =]]

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • awww
    19 years ago

    im wondering if you could do another? i just left one title before... please and thank you!

    Death Behind the Mask and Knife

    ~angel~

  • dollwithafrown
    19 years ago

    Sorry to bump this up so much, I was just wondering if you're still going to do the comments? I understand if you're busy and everything, and if you don't have the time that's totally cool. Just checking, in case you forgot. =]

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    I was looking for this!
    LOL!
    Thank you.
    I have a lot of commenting to do, but I will. I just seem to be writing a lot lately and want people's input. =S.
    Thanks for finding it for me.

  • dollwithafrown
    19 years ago

    Lol! No problem, happy to help. Haha.

    Okay, it's cool. I understand. If you want I'll comment on your newest poems to add some more input. No need to comment back.

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    *runs around the room in slow motion*...
    sorry i like being random

  • Tainted Beauty
    19 years ago

    Done, it was beautiful.

    Could you please do:

    How it died
    and
    Great about you

    Thanks

    --Steph