Hard Challanging Contest

Can I please reserve Internally Broken?

Thank you.

Tammie

Can i reserve Twisted Soul please?
Although it might take me a little longer than the 2nd to write it as I am busy this week, if that is okay?

Thank you.
xx

Uh. I love this. It's challenging; just what I love.
Nice contest.
It's hard to decide...
But I think I'll take..
Shattered Dreams.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

darnit i was gunna take shattered dreams.. lol :)

oh well i will expant my knowledge...

fountain of blood please.

-/2 Terra

ooh ooh angel of death please reserve!!!

heartache of love please.

..

Fountain of Blood
-/2 Terra

Water ripples at the touch of her fingertips
Gently flowing with beat of his breaths
Searching his arms, tracing scars of his past
The touch of the blade, had severed his heart

Oh gentle razor blade, look at you now
Coated in crimson, covered in blood
Sweet little sacrifices, look what you’ve done
Grabbed her addiction, and played with his soul

Porcelain drops staining her cheeks
What has she done, what has she caused
Clenching his fist, no sign of letting go
She falls to the floor, hand hung over the edge

Ripples of blood, soothed his still body
For there in the bathtub, he let his life drain
Look what she’s caused; he’s taken his life
Now the touch of a blade has shattered her heart

i hope this is what you wanted.. if not please let me know

-/2 Terra

i'm slightly confused aobut htis contest.. if only one person per title and two titles per genre, shouldn't you have less prizes or winners or something? i think you should have allowed for more entrants simply because you automatically get first or second in the category.. it doesn't allow for much competition either.

But its your contest. if i am wrong and made a mistake about what i said please tell me. i would really like to enter this contest. =[

pst what are the words we need? in each poem?

ladeda

NVM... can i change my reserve 2 "It was all a dream"? i hope u dont mind me being too wishy-washy ^^ i just like different words better... please?

:) omg.. 'it was only a dream' sounds so sweet... im gonna make 2 of em... post the sad one here; the love one on my profile :)

can i please have broken bloody and bruised plz

and umm...if we use the words u gave us like...the words for mine are...Knife,Life,Blood,Death/Dead/Dying so if we use that do we still have to use broken bloody and bruised in the poem?

Lost Hope, please.

Can i still reseve it was only a dream or is it taken then.. none of the other titles tempt me, lol

mistaken. il take that one, please.

can it be a different form of the word. like hate and hatred?

and heres the poem, if i need to, ill take it off.

Mistaken

In a dimly lit room,
Surrounded by bars,
And drunken demons,
Sat a beautiful child.

A young girl,
Blond hair,
Blue eyed beauty,
Grinning with no regrets.

A smirk of success,
She got you back,
She said she would,
Remember.

That one night,
A couple months ago,
You killed her,
Shattered her heart.

You crushed her world,
Letting it crumble,
Through stone cold fingers,
Mercilessly.

Over her shoulder,
She yelled through tears,
“You'll regret that you lied,
And you too shall die.”

Her intentions were clear,
She wanted you to suffer,
She wanted you to feel,
Every inch of her pain.

You deserved it,
You cheated,
You lied,
You promised.

“I love you,
Now and forever,”
You always said,
Faking a smile.

Soon she realized,
Your lies,
Your promises,
To other girls.

Saying they will
Forever be yours,
Treating them
All the same.

In the end,
Treating them like crap,
Like they are all the same,
There to feed your needs.

She developed,
Pure hatred,
For you,
And those alike.

Vowed to hate,
And seek revenge,
On those jerks,
Who tormented her.

Even if,
It led her to this:
A jacked up cell,
In a jacked up world.

She had to do it,
Not just for her,
But those other girls,
She drew a gun.

She left you a note,
On your car window,
Saying to meet her,
One last time.

That night,
She confronted you,
Whispering,
One last word.

“Good-bye.”

cool.

i hope this gets done quickly enough. i can't wait for the results.

death thoughts please..

u got a lot of reserves! awesome!

thank you

Well.. I read the poem Mistaken on here, and i'm up against it.. and it's AMAZING! lol And I'm not impressed with the poem i have wrote, but the meaning behind it means alot to me but here goes anyway...

Internally Broken

With a broken heart
And an empty hand
No one beside me
Alone I shall stand

Holding back the tears
It’s too much to take
I’m losing my mind
From all this heartbreak

But hide it I must
I wont show the pain
Internally broken
Shattered heart again

No mascara lines
Streaming down my face
Sympathy not wanted
It’s simply not the case

The pain is on the inside
And that’s where it will stay
My love lost forever
On this fateful day.

♥

can u reserve me for lies...

il do it straight away..

-.i.heart.u

HAHAHAHA lol its owk.. haha... i lyk dat ' EyeHeartYooh'
lool...

I hope you like it. It's not my best..but, it's what I could come up with at the moment.
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Shattered Dreams

Shattered dreams
And broken lies,
Dazed looks,
Badly covered eyes.

You look gorgeous,
When you cry,
Dazed with hate
And much to despise.

Thoughts of lies,
Tears with much to say,
Dreaming of horror
And dreaming of day.

Bruised lips
And much to share,
River of veins
And broken prayer.

A soul so bright
And thoughtless lies,
A dashing smile,
But ghostly eyes.

You look gorgeous,
When you cry,
Dazed with hate
And much to despise.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

!~!~ *is panicking* :P nah.. ive already got an idea ;) just you see... ill try to post this ASAP

^^^
I've written a poem for this contest..
But, I'm willing to write two, if you wouldn't mind.
I do understand that's a disadvantage, but I'm willing to do it, if you're willing to let it happen. =]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Lost Hope: Painful, Silence, Shattered, Hard

Lost Hope
By: Twisted Heart

A painful recollection of
a soul that died today
Inside the hidden chamber
of a heart rot with decay
A simple shattered silence
split against the angry night
Into the darkened hollow
came the embers of a light.

For just a moment in the crest
of the moonless sky
A star was found among the clouds
to whisper it's sad cry
Into the mist of teardrops
that had found a place to fall
Against the soul of hidden lies
that have come to call.

An Inkling of a heartache
that has burnt within the mind
No hope or understanding of
the memories confined
Just longing for the gentle breeze
that takes away the breath
And leads the lost among the stars
with the hand of death.

Can I reserve Twisted Soul?
xx

Deal. =]
Just let me know..I'll keep coming back and checking.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Doesn't matter to me...
I'm just offering to be nice. :)
I'll work on..
Died For Love.. I guess. If you want it Jess, just say. =]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Okay, well if It was all a dream doesn't end up getting done, can i use it then please?

I should have mine done tonight... If not, I'll try to get it done within the next few days. =]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

wow. this really is gunna take awhile. haveee funnn judging the poems. i cant wait for the outcome.

Twisted Soul.

As I lay here silently upon my bed
Thoughts are racing through my mind
Tears are streaming down my face
How did I fall so far behind?

My whole life is falling apart
Broken promises and shattered dreams
I'm now the cat that got trod on
Not the one who got the cream.

I close my eyes in wretched despair
As I think about things that are wrong
No one listened to my plea
When I asked to be emotionally strong.

Tears are falling thick and fast
Mascara forming clumps in my eyes
I take a shuddering breath
And silence my unheard cries.

I stare silently into space
Wishing that I was whole
Instead I live an empty life
With an empty and twisted soul.

**I Know We Didn't Have To Use The Title In The Poem But I Liked It That Way, I Thought It Fitted The Ending.**

can i plz pull out of this one i thought i already said i did but i guess not...i cant figure out anything for this one...thx anyways

uhm, how many more need to be submitted, besides the one in ur last post?

couldnt u just ommit that one?

ok. hmm. could i do the other poem, the one that hasnt been reserved? Only if i have time though. Could it be used for this contest?

If 'It was all a dream" becomes available can you let me know please? Cheers

im gonna unreserve. soory .. but i cant do it. its too hard. (emotionally for me)

hmm. i cant quite figure out what i could do with the two unreserved. if i figure it out ill let you know.