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Please comment and rate this poem and I'll read, rate, and coment 3 of yours poems. Please if you could not to give me so many depressive poems and NO explicted poems.

With Poppy

That is the poem.

NO ONE LINERS!

I will check it out! If you would be so kind as to read
"Fairytale Love..."
"Death Writtin Horror..."
I would be very thankful!

Edit:
Sorry I have to leave my comment in here because when ever I click on Love poems, Friendship poems, and there was one more but I cant remember... the site logs me out... and so I cant comment on the poem=( I'm really sry... Anyways I'll comment here.

You poem was very emotional and sad=( I thought you did a very well in getting that poetic feel to it, it also moves very smoothly. The rhyming is a slight bit... simple but it works. I'm glad u used periods to end sentences but I think using commas in the poem would give more of a rhythm to the poem, which would help the reader get more into it. I think you expressed a feeling very well, and if u just push your wording a bit more, I think it could REALLY push your poem into the next level, and make it stand out a lot more. I enjoyed the poem, was glad to read it, and I think (From reading just this poem) that you have talent lol, keep it up!

All opinions expressed in this comment are just opinions, you can choose to use them or forget them=)

~*+Megan+*~

that is a very good poem, love it

you can pick any of my poems.