New Poem 1 For 2

I checked out your newest poem, it was real good=) If you would be as so kind to read
"Fairytale Love..."
"Death Written Horror..."
I would be very thankful for your honest input=) thanks=D and great job on your poem, definitely a 5/5

-Ride of History
-Reminiscence

I believe I wrote a sentence or two. Could you please look at
"My Bittersweet Divine"
and
"Losing to the World"
?
thank you!

i commented your poem. could you please comment mine..

*passing away the pain
* strong

thanx