THESE PORCELAIN TEARS!!!

  • Bryan
    19 years ago

    i got a new poem called "These Porcelain Tears", if you r/r/c it ill do 2 of yours, if its a honest comment ill do 3, but PLEASE LEAVE CRITISM, AND THE NAME OF THE 2 POEMS YOU WANT ME TO DO. you dont tell me what you want done, i wont bother, LIKE I SAID I MIGHT DO THREE IF YOUR HONEST.

    MUST LEAVE COMMENT AND VOTE, IF YOU CANT VOTE ITS OK.

  • Cindy
    19 years ago

    I just finished your poem I really liked it. your word choice was great! Read voted and commented.
    Could you do the same for
    The Magic Of A Dream
    My World
    Thanks Happy New Year! Take Care Cindy

  • Bryan
    19 years ago

    done, thanx for the comments cindy, and thanx for the honest critisism jess.

    Anyone Else???

  • Taylor
    19 years ago

    Haha. Man, you must really want people's opinion on this "porcelain tears" thing. I swear, I've seen the title right about seven times tonight. Perhaps I'll take a look-see.

    ....

    Alright. I left a comment. Umm.. read my one with the dream in the title (i was just suggested in getting people to read it) and then whatever else catches your eye. They're all so old, I don't remember whats on there

  • Bryan
    19 years ago

    done good poems taylor,

    Anyone Else????

  • mistressxsork
    19 years ago

    Good work. Um.. do what ever ones catch your eye.

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    19 years ago

    Can you rrc 'thank you' and 'just call me friend'

    thnks a bunch. ur work-phenomenal!

  • Mousie
    19 years ago

    yeah i'll do it, and can you r/r/c these for me?

    Cowards They Are Not
    Eternal Love (lyrics)

    thanks, i'll be as honest as i can, and please be honest on mine too.

  • Bryan
    19 years ago

    done good poems

    Anyone Else?

  • Bryan
    19 years ago

    Anyone Else?

  • Bryan
    19 years ago

    come on guys this is a 1 for 3,
    Anyone Else?

  • Kayla
    19 years ago

    could you do "Crimson Artworks"? thanks! ~kayla~